Changeset 2290


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Timestamp:
Jun 11, 2013, 7:42:10 AM (6 years ago)
Author:
ylafon@…
Message:

Changes wording to use 'generate' to make distinction between generating clients and proxies (See #485)

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draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.html

    r2280 r2290  
    449449  }
    450450  @bottom-center {
    451        content: "Expires December 5, 2013";
     451       content: "Expires December 13, 2013";
    452452  }
    453453  @bottom-right {
     
    492492      <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    493493      <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p5-range-latest">
    494       <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-06-03">
     494      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-06-11">
    495495      <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
    496496      <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines range requests and the rules for constructing and combining responses to those requests.">
     
    518518            </tr>
    519519            <tr>
    520                <td class="left">Expires: December 5, 2013</td>
     520               <td class="left">Expires: December 13, 2013</td>
    521521               <td class="right">J. Reschke, Editor</td>
    522522            </tr>
     
    527527            <tr>
    528528               <td class="left"></td>
    529                <td class="right">June 3, 2013</td>
     529               <td class="right">June 11, 2013</td>
    530530            </tr>
    531531         </tbody>
     
    552552         in progress”.
    553553      </p>
    554       <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 5, 2013.</p>
     554      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 13, 2013.</p>
    555555      <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
    556556      <p>Copyright © 2013 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
     
    777777      </p>
    778778      <div id="rfc.figure.u.16"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.17"></span>  <a href="#header.if-range" class="smpl">If-Range</a> = <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">entity-tag</a> / <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">HTTP-date</a>
    779 </pre><p id="rfc.section.3.2.p.4">Clients <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> use an entity-tag marked as weak in an If-Range field value and <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> use a <a href="p4-conditional.html#header.last-modified" class="smpl">Last-Modified</a> date in an If-Range field value unless it has no entity-tag for the representation and the Last-Modified date it does have
     779</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.2.p.4">Clients <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> generate an entity-tag marked as weak in an If-Range field value and <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> generate a <a href="p4-conditional.html#header.last-modified" class="smpl">Last-Modified</a> date in an If-Range field value unless it has no entity-tag for the representation and the Last-Modified date it does have
    780780         for the representation is strong in the sense defined by <a href="p4-conditional.html#lastmod.comparison" title="Comparison">Section 2.2.2</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.2"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>.
    781781      </p>
     
    835835         support multipart responses. However, a server <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> generate a multipart/byteranges payload with only a single body part if multiple ranges were requested and only one range
    836836         was found to be satisfiable or only one range remained after coalescing. A client that cannot process a multipart/byteranges
    837          response <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> ask for multiple ranges in a single request.
     837         response <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> generate requests asking for multiple ranges in one single request.
    838838      </p>
    839839      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.9">When a multipart response payload is generated, the server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> send the parts in the same order that the corresponding byte-range-spec appeared in the received <a href="#header.range" class="smpl">Range</a> header field, excluding those ranges that were deemed unsatisfiable or that were coalesced into other ranges. A client that
     
    13481348         </li>
    13491349         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/438">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/438</a>&gt;: "media type registration template issues"
     1350         </li>
     1351         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485</a>&gt;: "MUSTs and other feedback"
    13501352         </li>
    13511353      </ul>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

    r2280 r2290  
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    466466<t>
    467    Clients &MUST-NOT; use an entity-tag marked as weak in an If-Range
    468    field value and &MUST-NOT; use a <x:ref>Last-Modified</x:ref> date in an
     467   Clients &MUST-NOT; generate an entity-tag marked as weak in an If-Range
     468   field value and &MUST-NOT; generate a <x:ref>Last-Modified</x:ref> date in an
    469469   If-Range field value unless it has no entity-tag for the representation and
    470470   the Last-Modified date it does have for the representation is strong
     
    584584   ranges were requested and only one range was found to be satisfiable or
    585585   only one range remained after coalescing.
    586    A client that cannot process a multipart/byteranges response &MUST-NOT; ask
    587    for multiple ranges in a single request.
     586   A client that cannot process a multipart/byteranges response &MUST-NOT;
     587   generate requests asking for multiple ranges in one single request.
    588588</t>
    589589<t>
     
    15711571      "media type registration template issues"
    15721572    </t>
     1573    <t>
     1574      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/485"/>:
     1575      "MUSTs and other feedback"
     1576    </t>
    15731577  </list>
    15741578</t>
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