Changeset 2255 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Timestamp:

19/05/13 08:53:51 (9 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) #461 truncate the redundant end of that confusing sentence

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p4-conditional.html (modified) (5 diffs)
• p4-conditional.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -449 +449 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires November 19, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires November 20, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -491 +491 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-05-18">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-05-19">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines HTTP/1.1 conditional requests, including metadata header fields for indicating state changes, request header fields for making preconditions on such state, and rules for constructing the responses to a conditional request when one or more preconditions evaluate to false.">
@@ -517 +517 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: November 19, 2013</td>
-               <td class="right">May 18, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: November 20, 2013</td>
+               <td class="right">May 19, 2013</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -545 +545 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on November 19, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on November 20, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2013 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -683 +683 @@
          data is available prior to the response header fields being sent and the digest does not need to be recalculated every time
          a validation request is received. However, if a resource has distinct representations that differ only in their metadata,
-         such as might occur with content negotiation over media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> incorporate additional information in the validator to distinguish those representations and avoid confusing undesired behaviors
-         (such as in caches).
+         such as might occur with content negotiation over media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> incorporate additional information in the validator to distinguish those representations.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.2.1.p.6">In contrast, a "weak validator" is representation metadata that might not change for every change to the representation data.

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

@@ -243 +243 @@
    media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin
    server &SHOULD; incorporate additional information in the validator to
-   distinguish those representations and avoid confusing undesired behaviors
-   (such as in caches).
+   distinguish those representations.
 </t>
 <t>