Changeset 2255


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Timestamp:
May 19, 2013, 1:53:51 AM (6 years ago)
Author:
fielding@…
Message:

(editorial) #461 truncate the redundant end of that confusing sentence

Location:
draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
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2 edited

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

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    449449  }
    450450  @bottom-center {
    451        content: "Expires November 19, 2013";
     451       content: "Expires November 20, 2013";
    452452  }
    453453  @bottom-right {
     
    491491      <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    492492      <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
    493       <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-05-18">
     493      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2013-05-19">
    494494      <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
    495495      <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines HTTP/1.1 conditional requests, including metadata header fields for indicating state changes, request header fields for making preconditions on such state, and rules for constructing the responses to a conditional request when one or more preconditions evaluate to false.">
     
    517517            </tr>
    518518            <tr>
    519                <td class="left">Expires: November 19, 2013</td>
    520                <td class="right">May 18, 2013</td>
     519               <td class="left">Expires: November 20, 2013</td>
     520               <td class="right">May 19, 2013</td>
    521521            </tr>
    522522         </tbody>
     
    545545         in progress”.
    546546      </p>
    547       <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on November 19, 2013.</p>
     547      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on November 20, 2013.</p>
    548548      <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
    549549      <p>Copyright © 2013 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
     
    683683         data is available prior to the response header fields being sent and the digest does not need to be recalculated every time
    684684         a validation request is received. However, if a resource has distinct representations that differ only in their metadata,
    685          such as might occur with content negotiation over media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> incorporate additional information in the validator to distinguish those representations and avoid confusing undesired behaviors
    686          (such as in caches).
     685         such as might occur with content negotiation over media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin server <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> incorporate additional information in the validator to distinguish those representations.
    687686      </p>
    688687      <p id="rfc.section.2.1.p.6">In contrast, a "weak validator" is representation metadata that might not change for every change to the representation data.
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

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    243243   media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin
    244244   server &SHOULD; incorporate additional information in the validator to
    245    distinguish those representations and avoid confusing undesired behaviors
    246    (such as in caches).
     245   distinguish those representations.
    247246</t>
    248247<t>
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