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Timestamp:
30/04/13 12:59:03 (9 years ago)
Author:
julian.reschke@…
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editorial improvements (see #461)

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

    r2218 r2230  
    2424  <!ENTITY field-components           "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#field.components' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
    2525  <!ENTITY header-date                "<xref target='Part2' x:rel='#header.date' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
     26  <!ENTITY safe-methods               "<xref target='Part2' x:rel='#safe.methods' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
    2627  <!ENTITY representation             "<xref target='Part2' x:rel='#representations' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
    2728  <!ENTITY messaging                  "<xref target='Part1' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
     
    242243   media types that happen to share the same data format, then the origin
    243244   server &SHOULD; incorporate additional information in the validator to
    244    distinguish those representations and avoid confusing cache behavior.
     245   distinguish those representations and avoid confusing undesired behaviors
     246   (such as in caches).
    245247</t>
    246248<t>
     
    726728   request method (e.g., PUT) from inadvertently modifying an existing
    727729   representation of the target resource when the client believes that
    728    the resource does not have a current representation.  This is a variation
    729    on the "lost update" problem that might arise if more than one client
    730    attempts to create an initial representation for the target resource.
     730   the resource does not have a current representation (&safe-methods;).
     731   This is a variation on the "lost update" problem that might arise if more
     732   than one client attempts to create an initial representation for the target
     733   resource.
    731734</t>
    732735<figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="If-None-Match"/>
     
    16011604  </list>
    16021605</t>
     1606<t>
     1607  Partly resolved issues:
     1608  <list style="symbols">
     1609    <t>
     1610      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/461"/>:
     1611      "Editorial suggestions"
     1612    </t>
     1613  </list>
     1614</t>
    16031615</section>
    16041616</section>
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