Changeset 2113 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Timestamp:

11/01/13 13:04:08 (10 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) make section on language tags more concise, since we already delegate the definition to RFC5646; partly addresses #426

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p2-semantics.html (modified) (1 diff)
• p2-semantics.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

@@ -1022 +1022 @@
          other human beings. Computer languages are explicitly excluded. HTTP uses language tags within the <a href="#header.accept-language" class="smpl">Accept-Language</a> and <a href="#header.content-language" class="smpl">Content-Language</a> fields.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.3.1.p.2">In summary, a language tag is composed of one or more parts: A primary language subtag followed by a possibly empty series
-         of subtags:
-      </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.10"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.12"></span>  <a href="#language.tags" class="smpl">language-tag</a> = &lt;Language-Tag, defined in <a href="#RFC5646" id="rfc.xref.RFC5646.2"><cite title="Tags for Identifying Languages">[RFC5646]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5646#section-2.1">Section 2.1</a>&gt;
-</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.3.1.p.4">White space is not allowed within the tag and all tags are case-insensitive. The name space of language subtags is administered
-         by the IANA (see &lt;<a href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/language-subtag-registry">http://www.iana.org/assignments/language-subtag-registry</a>&gt;).
-      </p>
-      <div id="rfc.figure.u.11"></div> 
-      <p>Example tags include:</p>  <pre class="text">  en, en-US, es-419, az-Arab, x-pig-latin, man-Nkoo-GN
-</pre> <p id="rfc.section.3.1.3.1.p.6">See <a href="#RFC5646" id="rfc.xref.RFC5646.3"><cite title="Tags for Identifying Languages">[RFC5646]</cite></a> for further information.
+</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.3.1.p.3">A language tag is composed of one or more parts: A primary language subtag followed by a possibly empty series of subtags.
+         White space is not allowed within the tag and all tags are case-insensitive. Example tags include:
+      </p>
+      <div id="rfc.figure.u.11"></div><pre class="text">  en, en-US, es-419, az-Arab, x-pig-latin, man-Nkoo-GN
+</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.3.1.p.5">See <a href="#RFC5646" id="rfc.xref.RFC5646.3"><cite title="Tags for Identifying Languages">[RFC5646]</cite></a> for further information.
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.iref.c.6"></div>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

@@ -623 +623 @@
    <x:ref>Accept-Language</x:ref> and <x:ref>Content-Language</x:ref> fields.
 </t>
-<t>
-   In summary, a language tag is composed of one or more parts: A primary
-   language subtag followed by a possibly empty series of subtags:
-</t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="language-tag"/>
   <x:ref>language-tag</x:ref> = &lt;Language-Tag, defined in <xref target="RFC5646" x:sec="2.1"/>&gt;
 </artwork></figure>
 <t>
+   A language tag is composed of one or more parts: A primary
+   language subtag followed by a possibly empty series of subtags.
    White space is not allowed within the tag and all tags are case-insensitive.
-   The name space of language subtags is administered by the IANA (see
-   <eref target="http://www.iana.org/assignments/language-subtag-registry"/>).
-</t>
-<figure>
-  <preamble>Example tags include:</preamble>
-<artwork type="example">
+   Example tags include:
+</t>
+<figure><artwork type="example">
   en, en-US, es-419, az-Arab, x-pig-latin, man-Nkoo-GN
-</artwork>
-</figure>
+</artwork></figure>
 <t>
    See <xref target="RFC5646"/> for further information.