Changeset 2074 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

Timestamp:

Dec 31, 2012, 3:51:04 AM (7 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -575 +575 @@
    applicable to that request. The following illustrates the resulting
    chain if B has a cached copy of an earlier response from O (via C)
-   for a request which has not been cached by UA or A.
+   for a request that has not been cached by UA or A.
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="drawing">
@@ -2596 +2596 @@
    Senders &SHOULD-NOT; combine multiple entries unless they are all
    under the same organizational control and the hosts have already been
-   replaced by pseudonyms. Senders &MUST-NOT; combine entries which
+   replaced by pseudonyms. Senders &MUST-NOT; combine entries that
    have different received-protocol values.
 </t>
@@ -2783 +2783 @@
 <t>
    HTTP/1.1 defaults to the use of "<x:dfn>persistent connections</x:dfn>",
-   which allow multiple requests and responses to be carried over a single
+   allowing multiple requests and responses to be carried over a single
    connection. The "<x:ref>close</x:ref>" connection-option is used to signal
    that a connection will not persist after the current request/response.
@@ -2847 +2847 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   Clients which assume persistent connections and pipeline immediately
+   Clients that assume persistent connections and pipeline immediately
    after connection establishment &SHOULD; be prepared to retry their
    connection if the first pipelined attempt fails. If a client does