Changeset 2069 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml

Timestamp:

30/12/12 09:01:09 (8 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) make security considerations intro specific to each document and xref to the main ones

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
   <!ENTITY mdash "&#8212;">
   <!ENTITY Note "<x:h xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'>Note:</x:h>">
+  <!ENTITY messaging                    "<xref target='Part1' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
+  <!ENTITY semantics                    "<xref target='Part2' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY architecture                 "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#architecture' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY conformance                  "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#conformance' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
@@ -677 +679 @@
 <section title="Security Considerations" anchor="security.considerations">
 <t>
-   This section is meant to inform application developers, information
-   providers, and users of the security limitations in HTTP/1.1 as
-   described by this document. The discussion does not include
-   definitive solutions to the problems revealed, though it does make
-   some suggestions for reducing security risks.
+   This section is meant to inform developers, information providers, and
+   users of known security concerns specific to HTTP/1.1 authentication.
+   More general security considerations are addressed in HTTP messaging
+   &messaging; and semantics &semantics;.
 </t>