Changeset 2069 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

30/12/12 09:01:09 (8 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) make security considerations intro specific to each document and xref to the main ones

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (7 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -449 +449 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires July 2, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires July 3, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -491 +491 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-12-29">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-12-30">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines HTTP/1.1 conditional requests, including metadata header fields for indicating state changes, request header fields for making preconditions on such state, and rules for constructing the responses to a conditional request when one or more preconditions evaluate to false.">
@@ -517 +517 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: July 2, 2013</td>
-               <td class="right">December 29, 2012</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: July 3, 2013</td>
+               <td class="right">December 30, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -545 +545 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on July 2, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on July 3, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -1219 +1219 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.6.2.p.2">The change controller is: "IETF (iesg@ietf.org) - Internet Engineering Task Force".</p>
       <h1 id="rfc.section.7"><a href="#rfc.section.7">7.</a>&nbsp;<a id="security.considerations" href="#security.considerations">Security Considerations</a></h1>
-      <p id="rfc.section.7.p.1">No additional security considerations have been identified beyond those applicable to HTTP in general <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.5"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>.
+      <p id="rfc.section.7.p.1">This section is meant to inform developers, information providers, and users of known security concerns specific to the HTTP/1.1
+         conditional request mechanisms. No additional security considerations have been identified beyond those applicable to HTTP
+         messaging <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.5"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a> and semantics <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.4"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.7.p.2">The validators defined by this specification are not intended to ensure the validity of a representation, guard against malicious
@@ -1315 +1317 @@
   <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">obs-text</a>      = &lt;obs-text, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.9"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#field.components" title="Field value components">Section 3.2.6</a>&gt;
 </pre><p id="rfc.section.B.p.4">The rules below are defined in other parts:</p>
-      <div id="rfc.figure.u.17"></div><pre class="inline">  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">HTTP-date</a>     = &lt;HTTP-date, defined in <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.4"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>, <a href="p2-semantics.html#http.date" title="Date/Time Formats">Section 7.1.1.1</a>&gt;
+      <div id="rfc.figure.u.17"></div><pre class="inline">  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">HTTP-date</a>     = &lt;HTTP-date, defined in <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.5"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>, <a href="p2-semantics.html#http.date" title="Date/Time Formats">Section 7.1.1.1</a>&gt;
 </pre><h1 id="rfc.section.C"><a href="#rfc.section.C">C.</a>&nbsp;<a id="collected.abnf" href="#collected.abnf">Collected ABNF</a></h1>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.18"></div> <pre class="inline"><a href="#header.etag" class="smpl">ETag</a> = entity-tag
@@ -1439 +1441 @@
                      </ul>
                   </li>
-                  <li><em>Part2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.1">1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.2">2.3.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.3">2.3.3</a>, <a href="#Part2"><b>9.1</b></a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.4">B</a><ul>
+                  <li><em>Part2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.1">1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.2">2.3.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.3">2.3.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.4">7</a>, <a href="#Part2"><b>9.1</b></a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.5">B</a><ul>
                         <li><em>Section 3.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.2">2.3.3</a></li>
                         <li><em>Section 5.3.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.3">2.3.3</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 7.1.1.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.4">B</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 7.1.1.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.5">B</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>