Changeset 2069 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

Timestamp:

Dec 30, 2012, 1:01:09 AM (7 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) make security considerations intro specific to each document and xref to the main ones

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

@@ -3745 +3745 @@
       </div>
       <h1 id="rfc.section.9"><a href="#rfc.section.9">9.</a>&nbsp;<a id="security.considerations" href="#security.considerations">Security Considerations</a></h1>
-      <p id="rfc.section.9.p.1">This section is meant to inform application developers, information providers, and users of the security limitations in HTTP/1.1
-         as described by this document. The discussion does not include definitive solutions to the problems revealed, though it does
-         make some suggestions for reducing security risks.
+      <p id="rfc.section.9.p.1">This section is meant to inform developers, information providers, and users of known security concerns relevant to HTTP/1.1
+         semantics and its use for transferring information over the Internet.
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.9.1"><a href="#rfc.section.9.1">9.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="security.sensitive" href="#security.sensitive">Transfer of Sensitive Information</a></h2>