Changeset 2066 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

Timestamp:

29/12/12 10:14:11 (10 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) rephrasing to better target the subject of requirements

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -452 +452 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires June 19, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires July 2, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -498 +498 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-12-16">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-12-29">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines requirements on HTTP caches and the associated header fields that control cache behavior or indicate cacheable response messages.">
@@ -524 +524 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: June 19, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: July 2, 2013</td>
                <td class="right">J. Reschke, Editor</td>
             </tr>
@@ -533 +533 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">December 16, 2012</td>
+               <td class="right">December 29, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -559 +559 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 19, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on July 2, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -884 +884 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.4.p.2">Note that any of the requirements listed above can be overridden by a cache-control extension; see <a href="#cache.control.extensions" title="Cache Control Extensions">Section&nbsp;7.2.3</a>.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.3">When a stored response is used to satisfy a request without validation, a cache <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> include a single <a href="#header.age" class="smpl">Age</a> header field (<a href="#header.age" id="rfc.xref.header.age.1" title="Age">Section&nbsp;7.1</a>) in the response with a value equal to the stored response's current_age; see <a href="#age.calculations" title="Calculating Age">Section&nbsp;4.1.3</a>.
+      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.3">When a stored response is used to satisfy a request without validation, a cache <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> send a single <a href="#header.age" class="smpl">Age</a> header field (<a href="#header.age" id="rfc.xref.header.age.1" title="Age">Section&nbsp;7.1</a>) in the response with a value equal to the stored response's current_age; see <a href="#age.calculations" title="Calculating Age">Section&nbsp;4.1.3</a>.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.4.p.4">A cache <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> write through requests with methods that are unsafe (<a href="p2-semantics.html#safe.methods" title="Safe Methods">Section 4.2.1</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.2"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>) to the origin server; i.e., a cache is not allowed to generate a reply to such a request before having forwarded the request