Changeset 2030 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

Timestamp:

04/12/12 12:58:55 (8 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) Deal with first half of mnot p1 feedback; addresses #408

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html (modified) (9 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -452 +452 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires June 4, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires June 7, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -498 +498 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-12-01">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-12-04">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines requirements on HTTP caches and the associated header fields that control cache behavior or indicate cacheable response messages.">
@@ -524 +524 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: June 4, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: June 7, 2013</td>
                <td class="right">J. Reschke, Editor</td>
             </tr>
@@ -533 +533 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">December 1, 2012</td>
+               <td class="right">December 4, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -559 +559 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 4, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 7, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -700 +700 @@
       </p>
       <ul class="empty">
-         <li>A conformant implementation of a HTTP cache. Note that this implies an HTTP/1.1 cache; this specification does not define
+         <li>A conformant implementation of an HTTP cache. Note that this implies an HTTP/1.1 cache; this specification does not define
             conformance for HTTP/1.0 caches.
          </li>
@@ -1436 +1436 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.7.3.p.8">Historically, HTTP required the Expires field-value to be no more than a year in the future. While longer freshness lifetimes
          are no longer prohibited, extremely large values have been demonstrated to cause problems (e.g., clock overflows due to use
-         of 32-bit integers for time values), and many caches will evict a response far sooner than that. Therefore, senders ought
-         not produce them.
+         of 32-bit integers for time values), and many caches will evict a response far sooner than that.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.7.3.p.9">An origin server without a clock <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> assign Expires values to a response unless these values were associated with the resource by a system or user with a reliable
@@ -1947 +1946 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.B.p.2">The rules below are defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.10"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>:
       </p>
-      <div id="rfc.figure.u.14"></div><pre class="inline">  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">OWS</a>           = &lt;OWS, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.11"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#whitespace" title="Whitespace">Section 3.2.1</a>&gt;
+      <div id="rfc.figure.u.14"></div><pre class="inline">  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">OWS</a>           = &lt;OWS, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.11"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#whitespace" title="Whitespace">Section 3.2.3</a>&gt;
   <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">field-name</a>    = &lt;field-name, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.12"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#header.fields" title="Header Fields">Section 3.2</a>&gt;
-  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">quoted-string</a> = &lt;quoted-string, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.13"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#field.components" title="Field value components">Section 3.2.4</a>&gt;
-  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">token</a>         = &lt;token, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.14"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#field.components" title="Field value components">Section 3.2.4</a>&gt;
+  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">quoted-string</a> = &lt;quoted-string, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.13"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#field.components" title="Field value components">Section 3.2.6</a>&gt;
+  <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">token</a>         = &lt;token, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.14"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#field.components" title="Field value components">Section 3.2.6</a>&gt;
 
   <a href="#imported.abnf" class="smpl">port</a>          = &lt;port, defined in <a href="#Part1" id="rfc.xref.Part1.15"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing">[Part1]</cite></a>, <a href="p1-messaging.html#uri" title="Uniform Resource Identifiers">Section 2.7</a>&gt;
@@ -2126 +2125 @@
                         <li><em>Section 2.7</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.15">B</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.17">B</a></li>
                         <li><em>Section 3.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.5">4.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.12">B</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 3.2.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.11">B</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 3.2.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.13">B</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.14">B</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 3.2.3</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.11">B</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 3.2.6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.13">B</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.14">B</a></li>
                         <li><em>Section 5.5</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.4">4</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.6">6</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.7">6</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.8">6</a></li>
                         <li><em>Section 5.7</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part1.16">B</a></li>