Changeset 2024 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

Nov 29, 2012, 3:51:24 PM (7 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

More adjustments to "Changes from RFC2616", based upon the issues list.

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -449 +449 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires June 2, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires June 3, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -491 +491 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-11-29">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-11-30">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines HTTP/1.1 conditional requests, including metadata header fields for indicating state changes, request header fields for making preconditions on such state, and rules for constructing the responses to a conditional request when one or more preconditions evaluate to false.">
@@ -517 +517 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: June 2, 2013</td>
-               <td class="right">November 29, 2012</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: June 3, 2013</td>
+               <td class="right">November 30, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -545 +545 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 2, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 3, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -1300 +1300 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.A.p.3">The <a href="#header.etag" class="smpl">ETag</a> header field ABNF has been changed to not use quoted-string, thus avoiding escaping issues. (<a href="#header.etag" id="rfc.xref.header.etag.3" title="ETag">Section&nbsp;2.3</a>)
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.A.p.4">The precedence for evaluation of conditional requests has been defined. (<a href="#precedence" title="Precedence">Section&nbsp;5</a>)
+      <p id="rfc.section.A.p.4">ETag is defined to provide an entity tag for the selected representation, thereby clarifying what it applies to in various
+         situations (such as a PUT response). (<a href="#header.etag" id="rfc.xref.header.etag.4" title="ETag">Section&nbsp;2.3</a>)
+      </p>
+      <p id="rfc.section.A.p.5">The precedence for evaluation of conditional requests has been defined. (<a href="#precedence" title="Precedence">Section&nbsp;5</a>)
       </p>
       <h1 id="rfc.section.B"><a href="#rfc.section.B">B.</a>&nbsp;<a id="imported.abnf" href="#imported.abnf">Imported ABNF</a></h1>
@@ -1383 +1386 @@
             </li>
             <li><a id="rfc.index.E" href="#rfc.index.E"><b>E</b></a><ul>
-                  <li>ETag header field&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.1">2</a>, <a href="#rfc.iref.e.1"><b>2.3</b></a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.2">6.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.3">A</a></li>
+                  <li>ETag header field&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.1">2</a>, <a href="#rfc.iref.e.1"><b>2.3</b></a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.2">6.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.3">A</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.etag.4">A</a></li>
                </ul>
             </li>