Changeset 2016 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

29/11/12 00:56:21 (10 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Clean up Changes from RFC2616.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -2402 +2402 @@
 <section anchor="changes.from.rfc.2616" title="Changes from RFC 2616">
 <t>
-  Make the specified age calculation algorithm less conservative.
+  The algorithm for calculating age is now less conservative.
   (<xref target="age.calculations"/>)
 </t>
 <t>
-  Remove requirement to consider "<x:ref>Content-Location</x:ref>" in successful
-  responses in order to determine the appropriate response to use.
+  The <x:ref>Content-Location</x:ref> response header field is no longer used
+  to determine the appropriate response to use.
   (<xref target="validation.model" />)
 </t>
 <t>
-  Clarify denial of service attack avoidance requirement.
+  Requirements regarding denial of service attack avoidance have been
+  clarified.
   (<xref target="invalidation.after.updates.or.deletions" />)
 </t>
 <t>
-  Do not mention RFC 2047 encoding and multiple languages in "<x:ref>Warning</x:ref>"
-  header fields anymore, as these aspects never were implemented. 
+  The <x:ref>Warning</x:ref> header field no longer uses RFC 2047 encoding,
+  nor allows multiple languages, as these aspects were not implemented.
   (<xref target="header.warning" />)
 </t>
 <t>
-  Introduce Cache Directive and Warn Code Registries.
+  This specification introduces the Cache Directive and Warn Code Registries.
   (<xref target="cache.control.extensions"/> and <xref target="warn.code.extensions"/>)
 </t>