Changeset 2015 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

Timestamp:

29/11/12 00:51:59 (8 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Clean up Changes from RFC2616.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -1297 +1297 @@
 <section title="Changes from RFC 2616" anchor="changes.from.rfc.2616">
 <t>
-  Introduce Range Specifier Registry.
+  This specification introduces a Range Specifier Registry.
   (<xref target="range.specifier.registry"/>)
 </t>
 <t>
-  Clarify that it is not ok to use a weak validator in a <x:ref>206</x:ref> response.
+  A weak validator cannot be used in a <x:ref>206</x:ref> response.
   (<xref target="status.206"/>)
 </t>
 <t>
-  Clarify that multipart/byteranges can consist of a single part.
+  multipart/byteranges can consist of a single part.
   (<xref target="internet.media.type.multipart.byteranges"/>)
 </t>