Changeset 2014

Timestamp:

29/11/12 00:50:43 (9 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Clean up Changes from RFC2616.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

@@ -1367 +1367 @@
 <section title="Changes from RFC 2616" anchor="changes.from.rfc.2616">
 <t>
-  Allow weak entity-tags in all requests except range requests (Sections
-  <xref target="weak.and.strong.validators" format="counter"/> and
+  Weak entity-tags are now allowed in all requests except range requests
+  (Sections <xref target="weak.and.strong.validators" format="counter"/> and
   <xref target="header.if-none-match" format="counter"/>).
 </t>
 <t>
-  Change "<x:ref>ETag</x:ref>" header field ABNF not to use quoted-string, thus
-  avoiding escaping issues.
+  The <x:ref>ETag</x:ref> header field ABNF has been changed to not use
+  quoted-string, thus avoiding escaping issues.
   (<xref target="header.etag"/>)
 </t>