Changeset 2002

Timestamp:

28/11/12 01:10:07 (9 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

fix the typo fix of [1976] that introduced a paste-o, indicating a need for rephrasing

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p6-cache.html (modified) (1 diff)
• p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -916 +916 @@
 </pre> <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.6">The freshness_lifetime is defined in <a href="#calculating.freshness.lifetime" title="Calculating Freshness Lifetime">Section&nbsp;4.1.1</a>; the current_age is defined in <a href="#age.calculations" title="Calculating Age">Section&nbsp;4.1.3</a>.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.7">Additionally, clients can influence freshness calculation — either constraining or it relaxing it — by using the max-age and
-         min-fresh request cache directives. See <a href="#cache-request-directive" title="Request Cache-Control Directives">Section&nbsp;7.2.1</a> for details.
+      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.7">Clients can send the max-age or min-fresh cache directives in a request to constrain or relax freshness calculations for the
+         corresponding response (<a href="#cache-request-directive" title="Request Cache-Control Directives">Section&nbsp;7.2.1</a>).
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.8">Note that freshness applies only to cache operation; it cannot be used to force a user agent to refresh its display or reload

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -578 +578 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   Additionally, clients can influence freshness calculation &mdash; either
-   constraining or it relaxing it &mdash; by using the max-age and min-fresh
-   request cache directives. See <xref target="cache-request-directive" /> 
-   for details.
+   Clients can send the max-age or min-fresh cache directives in a request to
+   constrain or relax freshness calculations for the corresponding response
+   (<xref target="cache-request-directive" />). 
 </t>
 <t>