Changeset 1970 for draft-ietf-httpbis

Timestamp:

03/11/12 14:20:57 (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

add ABNF comment to fwd-ref protocol-name/-version

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p1-messaging.html (modified) (4 diffs)
• p1-messaging.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -1822 +1822 @@
                           [ <a href="#rule.whitespace" class="smpl">RWS</a> <a href="#rule.comment" class="smpl">comment</a> ] )
   <a href="#header.via" class="smpl">received-protocol</a> = [ <a href="#header.upgrade" class="smpl">protocol-name</a> "/" ] <a href="#header.upgrade" class="smpl">protocol-version</a>
+                      ; see <a href="#header.upgrade" id="rfc.xref.header.upgrade.1" title="Upgrade">Section&nbsp;6.3</a>
   <a href="#header.via" class="smpl">received-by</a>       = ( <a href="#uri" class="smpl">uri-host</a> [ ":" <a href="#uri" class="smpl">port</a> ] ) / <a href="#header.via" class="smpl">pseudonym</a>
   <a href="#header.via" class="smpl">pseudonym</a>         = <a href="#rule.token.separators" class="smpl">token</a>
@@ -2192 +2193 @@
                   <td class="left">http</td>
                   <td class="left">standard</td>
-                  <td class="left"> <a href="#header.upgrade" id="rfc.xref.header.upgrade.1" title="Upgrade">Section&nbsp;6.3</a> 
+                  <td class="left"> <a href="#header.upgrade" id="rfc.xref.header.upgrade.2" title="Upgrade">Section&nbsp;6.3</a> 
                   </td>
                </tr>
@@ -2852 +2853 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.A.2.p.11">Remove requirement to retry requests under certain circumstances when the server prematurely closes the connection. (<a href="#persistent.reuse" title="Reuse">Section&nbsp;6.2.2</a>)
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.A.2.p.12">Define the semantics of the <a href="#header.upgrade" class="smpl">Upgrade</a> header field in responses other than 101 (this was incorporated from <a href="#RFC2817" id="rfc.xref.RFC2817.3"><cite title="Upgrading to TLS Within HTTP/1.1">[RFC2817]</cite></a>). (<a href="#header.upgrade" id="rfc.xref.header.upgrade.2" title="Upgrade">Section&nbsp;6.3</a>)
+      <p id="rfc.section.A.2.p.12">Define the semantics of the <a href="#header.upgrade" class="smpl">Upgrade</a> header field in responses other than 101 (this was incorporated from <a href="#RFC2817" id="rfc.xref.RFC2817.3"><cite title="Upgrading to TLS Within HTTP/1.1">[RFC2817]</cite></a>). (<a href="#header.upgrade" id="rfc.xref.header.upgrade.3" title="Upgrade">Section&nbsp;6.3</a>)
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.A.2.p.13">Registration of Transfer Codings now requires IETF Review (<a href="#transfer.coding.registry" title="Transfer Coding Registry">Section&nbsp;7.4</a>)
@@ -3335 +3336 @@
             </li>
             <li><a id="rfc.index.U" href="#rfc.index.U"><b>U</b></a><ul>
-                  <li>Upgrade header field&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.iref.u.5"><b>6.3</b></a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.upgrade.1">7.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.upgrade.2">A.2</a></li>
+                  <li>Upgrade header field&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.header.upgrade.1">5.7</a>, <a href="#rfc.iref.u.5"><b>6.3</b></a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.upgrade.2">7.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.header.upgrade.3">A.2</a></li>
                   <li>upstream&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.iref.u.2"><b>2.3</b></a></li>
                   <li>URI scheme&nbsp;&nbsp;

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -2465 +2465 @@
   <x:anchor-alias value="Via"/>
 <t>
-   The "Via" header field &MUST; be sent by a proxy or gateway
-   in forwarded messages to
-   indicate the intermediate protocols and recipients between the user
-   agent and the server on requests, and between the origin server and
+   The "Via" header field &MUST; be sent by a proxy or gateway in forwarded
+   messages to indicate the intermediate protocols and recipients between the
+   user agent and the server on requests, and between the origin server and
    the client on responses. It is analogous to the "Received" field
    used by email systems (<xref target="RFC5322" x:fmt="of" x:sec="3.6.7"/>).
@@ -2479 +2478 @@
                           [ <x:ref>RWS</x:ref> <x:ref>comment</x:ref> ] )
   <x:ref>received-protocol</x:ref> = [ <x:ref>protocol-name</x:ref> "/" ] <x:ref>protocol-version</x:ref>
+                      ; see <xref target="header.upgrade"/>
   <x:ref>received-by</x:ref>       = ( <x:ref>uri-host</x:ref> [ ":" <x:ref>port</x:ref> ] ) / <x:ref>pseudonym</x:ref>
   <x:ref>pseudonym</x:ref>         = <x:ref>token</x:ref>