Changeset 1910 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

Timestamp:

Sep 21, 2012, 11:35:14 PM (7 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) be more consistent when referring to a "body", preferring the
defined terms for message (body), payload (body), and representation (data).

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html (modified) (7 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -452 +452 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires March 22, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires March 25, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -499 +499 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-09-18">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-09-21">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. This document defines requirements on HTTP caches and the associated header fields that control cache behavior or indicate cacheable response messages.">
@@ -525 +525 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: March 22, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: March 25, 2013</td>
                <td class="right">M. Nottingham, Editor</td>
             </tr>
@@ -538 +538 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">September 18, 2012</td>
+               <td class="right">September 21, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -564 +564 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on March 22, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on March 25, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -772 +772 @@
       </p>
       <ul class="empty">
-         <li>A validator that is defined by the origin server such that its current value will change if the representation body changes;
+         <li>A validator that is defined by the origin server such that its current value will change if the representation data changes;
             i.e., an entity-tag that is not marked as weak (<a href="p4-conditional.html#header.etag" title="ETag">Section 2.3</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.2"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>) or, if no entity-tag is provided, a <a href="p4-conditional.html#header.last-modified" class="smpl">Last-Modified</a> value that is strong in the sense defined by <a href="p4-conditional.html#lastmod.comparison" title="Comparison">Section 2.2.2</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.3"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>.
          </li>
@@ -1066 +1066 @@
          <li>A <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.304" class="smpl">304 (Not Modified)</a> response status code indicates that the stored response can be updated and reused; see <a href="#freshening.responses" title="Freshening Responses with 304 Not Modified">Section&nbsp;4.2.1</a>.
          </li>
-         <li>A full response (i.e., one with a response body) indicates that none of the stored responses nominated in the conditional
-            request is suitable. Instead, the cache can use the full response to satisfy the request and <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> replace the stored response(s).
+         <li>A full response (i.e., one with a payload body) indicates that none of the stored responses nominated in the conditional request
+            is suitable. Instead, the cache can use the full response to satisfy the request and <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> replace the stored response(s).
          </li>
          <li>However, if a cache receives a <a href="p2-semantics.html#status.5xx" class="smpl">5xx (Server Error)</a> response while attempting to validate a response, it can either forward this response to the requesting client, or act as