Changeset 1910 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

Timestamp:

22/09/12 06:35:14 (10 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) be more consistent when referring to a "body", preferring the
defined terms for message (body), payload (body), and representation (data).

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -1882 +1882 @@
          except as noted above to replace an empty path with "/" or "*".
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.5.8.p.3">A non-transforming proxy <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> preserve the message payload (<a href="p2-semantics.html#payload" title="Message Payload">Section 3.1</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.20"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>), though it <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> change the message body through application or removal of a transfer-coding (<a href="#transfer.codings" title="Transfer Codings">Section&nbsp;4</a>).
+      <p id="rfc.section.5.8.p.3">A non-transforming proxy <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> preserve the message payload (<a href="p2-semantics.html#payload" title="Message Payload">Section 3.4</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.20"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>), though it <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> change the message body through application or removal of a transfer-coding (<a href="#transfer.codings" title="Transfer Codings">Section&nbsp;4</a>).
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.5.8.p.4">A non-transforming proxy <em class="bcp14">SHOULD NOT</em> modify header fields that provide information about the end points of the communication chain, the resource state, or the
@@ -1892 +1892 @@
          <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.allow" class="smpl">Allow</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.allow" title="Allow">Section 7.4.1</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.21"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
          </li>
-         <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-location" class="smpl">Content-Location</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-location" title="Content-Location">Section 3.2.4</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.22"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
+         <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-location" class="smpl">Content-Location</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-location" title="Content-Location">Section 3.1.4</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.22"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
          </li>
          <li>Content-MD5 (<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616#section-14.15">Section 14.15</a> of <a href="#RFC2616" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.3"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1">[RFC2616]</cite></a>)
@@ -1908 +1908 @@
       </p>
       <ul>
-         <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-encoding" class="smpl">Content-Encoding</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-encoding" title="Content-Encoding">Section 3.2.2</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.24"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
+         <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-encoding" class="smpl">Content-Encoding</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-encoding" title="Content-Encoding">Section 3.1.2</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.24"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
          </li>
          <li><a href="p5-range.html#header.content-range" class="smpl">Content-Range</a> (<a href="p5-range.html#header.content-range" title="Content-Range">Section 5.2</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.2"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Range Requests">[Part5]</cite></a>)
          </li>
-         <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-type" class="smpl">Content-Type</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-type" title="Content-Type">Section 3.2.1</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.25"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
+         <li><a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-type" class="smpl">Content-Type</a> (<a href="p2-semantics.html#header.content-type" title="Content-Type">Section 3.1.1</a> of <a href="#Part2" id="rfc.xref.Part2.25"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Semantics and Content">[Part2]</cite></a>)
          </li>
       </ul>
@@ -3225 +3225 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.D.8.p.2">Partly resolved issues: </p>
       <ul>
-         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/88">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/88</a>&gt;: "205 Bodies" (took out language that implied that there might be methods for which a request body MUST NOT be included)
+         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/88">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/88</a>&gt;: "205 Bodies" (took out language that implied that there might be methods for which a payload body MUST NOT be included)
          </li>
          <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/163">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/163</a>&gt;: "editorial improvements around HTTP-date"
@@ -3638 +3638 @@
                   <li><em>Part2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.1">1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.2">2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.3">2.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.4">2.7</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.5">2.7.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.6">3.1.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.7">3.1.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.8">3.1.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.9">3.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.10">3.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.11">3.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.12">3.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.13">3.3.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.14">3.3.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.15">3.3.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.16">4.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.17">5.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.18">5.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.19">5.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.20">5.8</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.21">5.8</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.22">5.8</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.23">5.8</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.24">5.8</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.25">5.8</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.26">5.9</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.27">6.2.2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.28">6.2.2.2</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.29">6.3</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.30">7.4</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.31">8.6</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.32">8.6</a>, <a href="#Part2"><b>10.1</b></a><ul>
                         <li><em>Section 2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.4">2.7</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 3.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.20">5.8</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 3.2.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.25">5.8</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 3.2.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.24">5.8</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 3.2.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.22">5.8</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 3.1.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.25">5.8</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 3.1.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.24">5.8</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 3.1.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.22">5.8</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 3.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.20">5.8</a></li>
                         <li><em>Section 4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.6">3.1.1</a></li>
                         <li><em>Section 4.2.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.27">6.2.2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part2.28">6.2.2.2</a></li>