Changeset 1869 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

Timestamp:

Sep 6, 2012, 12:34:14 AM (7 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

(editorial) improve bullet on network congestion. Addresses #339

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -449 +449 @@
   } 
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-       content: "Expires March 9, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires March 10, 2013"; 
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       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-09-05">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-09-06">
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@@ -524 +524 @@
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-               <td class="left">Expires: March 9, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: March 10, 2013</td>
                <td class="right">greenbytes</td>
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             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">September 5, 2012</td>
+               <td class="right">September 6, 2012</td>
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@@ -556 +556 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on March 9, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on March 10, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -2008 +2008 @@
             waiting for each response, allowing a single connection to be used much more efficiently and with less overall latency.
          </li>
-         <li>Network congestion is reduced by reducing the number of packets caused by connection establishment and tear-down, and by allowing
-            sufficient time for send/receive windows to adjust to the available network bandwidth.
+         <li>For TCP connections, network congestion is reduced by eliminating the packets associated with the three way handshake and
+            graceful close procedures, and by allowing sufficient time to determine the congestion state of the network.
          </li>
          <li>Latency on subsequent requests is reduced since there is no time spent in the connection opening handshake.</li>