Changeset 1869


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Timestamp:
Sep 6, 2012, 12:34:14 AM (7 years ago)
Author:
fielding@…
Message:

(editorial) improve bullet on network congestion. Addresses #339

Location:
draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
Files:
2 edited

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

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    451        content: "Expires March 9, 2013";
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    492492      <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    493493      <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-latest">
    494       <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-09-05">
     494      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-09-06">
    495495      <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2145">
    496496      <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
     
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    526                <td class="left">Expires: March 9, 2013</td>
     526               <td class="left">Expires: March 10, 2013</td>
    527527               <td class="right">greenbytes</td>
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    531                <td class="right">September 5, 2012</td>
     531               <td class="right">September 6, 2012</td>
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    556556         in progress”.
    557557      </p>
    558       <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on March 9, 2013.</p>
     558      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on March 10, 2013.</p>
    559559      <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
    560560      <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
     
    20082008            waiting for each response, allowing a single connection to be used much more efficiently and with less overall latency.
    20092009         </li>
    2010          <li>Network congestion is reduced by reducing the number of packets caused by connection establishment and tear-down, and by allowing
    2011             sufficient time for send/receive windows to adjust to the available network bandwidth.
     2010         <li>For TCP connections, network congestion is reduced by eliminating the packets associated with the three way handshake and
     2011            graceful close procedures, and by allowing sufficient time to determine the congestion state of the network.
    20122012         </li>
    20132013         <li>Latency on subsequent requests is reduced since there is no time spent in the connection opening handshake.</li>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

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    28042804      </t>
    28052805      <t>
    2806         Network congestion is reduced by reducing the number of packets
    2807         caused by connection establishment and tear-down, and by allowing
    2808         sufficient time for send/receive windows to adjust to the
    2809         available network bandwidth.
     2806        For TCP connections, network congestion is reduced by eliminating the
     2807        packets associated with the three way handshake and graceful close
     2808        procedures, and by allowing sufficient time to determine the
     2809        congestion state of the network.
    28102810      </t>
    28112811      <t>
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