Changeset 1833 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

Timestamp:

20/08/12 00:10:23 (10 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

mark-up some definitions and clarify a heading

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -2145 +2145 @@
    <xref target="Part2"/>, and a target resource upon which to apply those
    semantics.  A URI reference (<xref target="uri"/>) is typically used as
-   an identifier for the "target resource", which a user agent would resolve
-   to its absolute form in order to obtain the "target URI".  The target URI
+   an identifier for the "<x:dfn>target resource</x:dfn>", which a user agent
+   would resolve to its absolute form in order to obtain the
+   "<x:dfn>target URI</x:dfn>".  The target URI
    excludes the reference's fragment identifier component, if any,
    since fragment identifiers are reserved for client-side processing
@@ -2246 +2247 @@
    the next inbound proxy server or directly to the origin server indicated
    by the request-target.  Requirements on such "forwarding" of messages are
-   defined in <xref target="intermediary.forwarding"/>.
+   defined in <xref target="message.forwarding"/>.
 </t>
 <t>
@@ -2374 +2375 @@
    connection context, in order to identify the intended target resource and
    properly service the request. The URI derived from this reconstruction
-   process is referred to as the "effective request URI".
+   process is referred to as the "<x:dfn>effective request URI</x:dfn>".
 </t>
 <t>
@@ -2457 +2458 @@
 </section>
 
-<section title="Intermediary Forwarding" anchor="intermediary.forwarding">
+<section title="Message Forwarding" anchor="message.forwarding">
 <t>
    As described in <xref target="intermediaries"/>, intermediaries can serve
@@ -2474 +2475 @@
 <t>
    If a proxy receives a request-target with a host name that is not a
-   fully qualified domain name, it &MAY; add its domain to the host name
+   fully qualified domain name, it &MAY; add its own domain to the host name
    it received when forwarding the request.  A proxy &MUST-NOT; change the
    host name if it is a fully qualified domain name.
 </t>
 <t>
-   A non-transforming proxy &MUST-NOT; rewrite the "path-absolute" and "query"
+   A non-transforming proxy &MUST-NOT; modify the "path-absolute" and "query"
    parts of the received request-target when forwarding it to the next inbound
    server, except as noted above to replace an empty path with "/" or "*".