Changeset 1758 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

11/07/12 07:34:34 (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

simplify sentence to avoid confusion

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -449 +449 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires January 11, 2013"; 
+       content: "Expires January 12, 2013"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -490 +490 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-07-10">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-07-11">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 4 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 4 defines request header fields for indicating conditional requests and the rules for constructing responses to those requests.">
@@ -516 +516 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: January 11, 2013</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: January 12, 2013</td>
                <td class="right">J. Reschke, Editor</td>
             </tr>
@@ -525 +525 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">July 10, 2012</td>
+               <td class="right">July 11, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -555 +555 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on January 11, 2013.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on January 12, 2013.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -1103 +1103 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.4">If the recipient of a 304 response does not have a cached representation corresponding to the entity-tag indicated by the
          304 response, then the recipient <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> use the 304 to update its own cache. If this conditional request originated with an outbound client, such as a user agent
-         with its own cache sending a conditional GET to a shared proxy, then the 304 response <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> be forwarded to the outbound client. Otherwise, the recipient <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> disregard the 304 response and repeat the request without any preconditions.
+         with its own cache sending a conditional GET to a shared proxy, then the 304 response <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> be forwarded to that client. Otherwise, the recipient <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> disregard the 304 response and repeat the request without any preconditions.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.5">If a cache uses a received 304 response to update a cache entry, the cache <em class="bcp14">MUST</em> update the entry to reflect any new field values given in the response.