Changeset 1753 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

Jul 9, 2012, 4:55:17 PM (7 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Make wording in note on query caching less awkward

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -739 +739 @@
 <x:note>
    <t>
-      &Note; RFC 2616 (<xref target="RFC2616" x:fmt=","
-      x:sec="13.9"/>) required that caches do not calculate heuristic
-      freshness for URIs with query components (i.e., those containing '?').
-      In practice, this has not been widely implemented. Therefore, servers
-      are encouraged to send explicit directives (e.g., Cache-Control:
-      no-cache) if they wish to preclude caching.
+      &Note; <xref target="RFC2616" x:fmt="," x:sec="13.9"/> prohibited caches
+      from calculating heuristic freshness for URIs with query components
+      (i.e., those containing '?'). In practice, this has not been widely
+      implemented. Therefore, servers are encouraged to send explicit
+      directives (e.g., Cache-Control: no-cache) if they wish to preclude
+      caching.
    </t>
 </x:note>