Changeset 1753

Timestamp:

09/07/12 23:55:17 (10 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Make wording in note on query caching less awkward

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p6-cache.html (modified) (1 diff)
• p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -992 +992 @@
       </p>
       <div class="note" id="rfc.section.4.1.2.p.4"> 
-         <p> <b>Note:</b> RFC 2616 (<a href="#RFC2616" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1">[RFC2616]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616#section-13.9">Section 13.9</a>) required that caches do not calculate heuristic freshness for URIs with query components (i.e., those containing '?'). In
-            practice, this has not been widely implemented. Therefore, servers are encouraged to send explicit directives (e.g., Cache-Control:
+         <p> <b>Note:</b>  <a href="#RFC2616" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1">[RFC2616]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616#section-13.9">Section 13.9</a> prohibited caches from calculating heuristic freshness for URIs with query components (i.e., those containing '?'). In practice,
+            this has not been widely implemented. Therefore, servers are encouraged to send explicit directives (e.g., Cache-Control:
             no-cache) if they wish to preclude caching.
          </p> 

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -739 +739 @@
 <x:note>
    <t>
-      &Note; RFC 2616 (<xref target="RFC2616" x:fmt=","
-      x:sec="13.9"/>) required that caches do not calculate heuristic
-      freshness for URIs with query components (i.e., those containing '?').
-      In practice, this has not been widely implemented. Therefore, servers
-      are encouraged to send explicit directives (e.g., Cache-Control:
-      no-cache) if they wish to preclude caching.
+      &Note; <xref target="RFC2616" x:fmt="," x:sec="13.9"/> prohibited caches
+      from calculating heuristic freshness for URIs with query components
+      (i.e., those containing '?'). In practice, this has not been widely
+      implemented. Therefore, servers are encouraged to send explicit
+      directives (e.g., Cache-Control: no-cache) if they wish to preclude
+      caching.
    </t>
 </x:note>