Changeset 172 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

Jan 22, 2008, 6:11:10 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: replace redundant "the HTTP protocol" phrases or rephrase

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -964 +964 @@
    retransmitting the full response if the cached entry is good, and we
    do not want to pay the overhead of an extra round trip if the cached
-   entry is invalid, the HTTP/1.1 protocol supports the use of
+   entry is invalid, HTTP/1.1 supports the use of
    conditional methods.
 </t>
@@ -1141 +1141 @@
 <section title="Non-modifiable Headers" anchor="non-modifiable.headers">
 <t>
-   Some features of the HTTP/1.1 protocol, such as Digest
+   Some features of HTTP/1.1, such as Digest
    Authentication, depend on the value of certain end-to-end headers. A
    transparent proxy &SHOULD-NOT;  modify an end-to-end header unless the
@@ -1393 +1393 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   There is no way for the HTTP protocol to guarantee that all such
+   There is no way for HTTP to guarantee that all such
    cache entries are marked invalid. For example, the request that
    caused the change at the origin server might not have gone through
@@ -1609 +1609 @@
    the named field or fields, and not to the rest of the request or
    response. This mechanism supports extensibility; implementations of
-   future versions of the HTTP protocol might apply these directives to
+   future versions of HTTP might apply these directives to
    header fields not defined in HTTP/1.1.
 </t>