Changeset 172 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

Jan 22, 2008, 6:11:10 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: replace redundant "the HTTP protocol" phrases or rephrase

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -624 +624 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.4.p.6">Clients <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> issue simple (non-subrange) GET requests with either weak validators or strong validators. Clients <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> use weak validators in other forms of request.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.7">The only function that the HTTP/1.1 protocol defines on validators is comparison. There are two validator comparison functions,
-         depending on whether the comparison context allows the use of weak validators or not: 
+      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.7">The only function that HTTP/1.1 defines on validators is comparison. There are two validator comparison functions, depending
+         on whether the comparison context allows the use of weak validators or not: 
       </p>
       <ul>