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Timestamp:
Jan 22, 2008, 6:11:10 PM (12 years ago)
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fielding@…
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editorial: replace redundant "the HTTP protocol" phrases or rephrase

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

    r171 r172  
    556556<section title="Overall Operation" anchor="intro.overall.operation">
    557557<t>
    558    The HTTP protocol is a request/response protocol. A client sends a
     558   HTTP is a request/response protocol. A client sends a
    559559   request to the server in the form of a request method, URI, and
    560560   protocol version, followed by a MIME-like message containing request
     
    10311031</t>
    10321032<t>
    1033    The HTTP protocol does not place any a priori limit on the length of
     1033   HTTP does not place any a priori limit on the length of
    10341034   a URI. Servers &MUST; be able to handle the URI of any resource they
    10351035   serve, and &SHOULD; be able to handle URIs of unbounded length if they
     
    27452745   (e.g. the user's name, location, mail address, passwords, encryption
    27462746   keys, etc.), and &SHOULD; be very careful to prevent unintentional
    2747    leakage of this information via the HTTP protocol to other sources.
     2747   leakage of this information.
    27482748   We very strongly recommend that a convenient interface be provided
    27492749   for the user to control dissemination of such information, and that
     
    27612761   interest. This information is clearly confidential in nature and its
    27622762   handling can be constrained by law in certain countries. People using
    2763    the HTTP protocol to provide data are responsible for ensuring that
     2763   HTTP to provide data are responsible for ensuring that
    27642764   such material is not distributed without the permission of any
    27652765   individuals that are identifiable by the published results.
     
    28812881</t>
    28822882<t>
    2883    The HTTP protocol has evolved considerably over the years. It has
     2883   HTTP has evolved considerably over the years. It has
    28842884   benefited from a large and active developer community--the many
    28852885   people who have participated on the www-talk mailing list--and it is
     
    36643664<section title="Internet Media Types" anchor="internet.media.type.http">
    36653665<t>
    3666    In addition to defining the HTTP/1.1 protocol, this document serves
     3666   In addition to defining HTTP/1.1, this document serves
    36673667   as the specification for the Internet media type "message/http" and
    36683668   "application/http". The following is to be registered with IANA <xref target="RFC4288"/>.
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