Changeset 1707 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

03/07/12 17:25:39 (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

tune conformance requirements (see #271)

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -1611 +1611 @@
    this new directive to mean that, in addition to any private cache, any
    cache that is shared only by members of the community named within its
-   value may cache the response. An origin server wishing to allow the UCI
-   community to use an otherwise private response in their shared cache(s)
-   could do so by including
+   value is allowed to cache the response. An origin server wishing to allow
+   the UCI community to use an otherwise private response in their shared
+   cache(s) could do so by including
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="example">