23/06/12 12:01:38 (8 years ago)

Simplify use of "Note:", make upper/lowercase of sentence start consistent; use "—" where appropriate

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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.html

    r1689 r1692  
    449449  }
    450450  @bottom-center {
    451        content: "Expires December 24, 2012";
     451       content: "Expires December 25, 2012";
    452452  }
    453453  @bottom-right {
    489489      <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
    490490      <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p7-auth-latest">
    491       <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-06-22">
     491      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-06-23">
    492492      <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
    493493      <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 7 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 7 defines the HTTP Authentication framework.">
    520520            </tr>
    521521            <tr>
    522                <td class="left">Expires: December 24, 2012</td>
     522               <td class="left">Expires: December 25, 2012</td>
    523523               <td class="right">greenbytes</td>
    524524            </tr>
    525525            <tr>
    526526               <td class="left"></td>
    527                <td class="right">June 22, 2012</td>
     527               <td class="right">June 23, 2012</td>
    528528            </tr>
    529529         </tbody>
    553553         in progress”.
    554554      </p>
    555       <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 24, 2012.</p>
     555      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 25, 2012.</p>
    556556      <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
    557557      <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
    784784               can use a generic parser that applies to all authentication schemes.
    785785            </p>
    786             <p> <b>Note:</b> the fact that the value syntax for the "realm" parameter is restricted to quoted-string was a bad design choice not to be
     786            <p> <b>Note:</b> The fact that the value syntax for the "realm" parameter is restricted to quoted-string was a bad design choice not to be
    787787               repeated for new parameters.
    788788            </p>
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