Changeset 1692 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

Timestamp:

Jun 23, 2012, 5:01:38 AM (8 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

Simplify use of "Note:", make upper/lowercase of sentence start consistent; use "—" where appropriate

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html (modified) (8 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -452 +452 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires December 24, 2012"; 
+       content: "Expires December 25, 2012"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -494 +494 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-06-22">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2012-06-23">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypertext information systems. HTTP has been in use by the World Wide Web global information initiative since 1990. This document is Part 6 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 6 defines requirements on HTTP caches and the associated header fields that control cache behavior or indicate cacheable response messages.">
@@ -520 +520 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: December 24, 2012</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: December 25, 2012</td>
                <td class="right">M. Nottingham, Editor</td>
             </tr>
@@ -537 +537 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">June 22, 2012</td>
+               <td class="right">June 23, 2012</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -567 +567 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 24, 2012.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on December 25, 2012.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2012 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -923 +923 @@
 </pre> <p id="rfc.section.2.3.p.6">The freshness_lifetime is defined in <a href="#calculating.freshness.lifetime" title="Calculating Freshness Lifetime">Section&nbsp;2.3.1</a>; the current_age is defined in <a href="#age.calculations" title="Calculating Age">Section&nbsp;2.3.2</a>.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.2.3.p.7">Additionally, clients can influence freshness calculation -- either constraining it relaxing it -- by using the max-age and
+      <p id="rfc.section.2.3.p.7">Additionally, clients can influence freshness calculation — either constraining it relaxing it — by using the max-age and
          min-fresh request cache directives. See <a href="#cache-request-directive" title="Request Cache-Control Directives">Section&nbsp;3.2.1</a> for details.
       </p>
@@ -1326 +1326 @@
             case-insensitive.
          </li>
-         <li> <b>Note:</b> This usage of the word "private" only controls where the response can be stored; it cannot ensure the privacy of the message
+         <li><b>Note:</b> This usage of the word "private" only controls where the response can be stored; it cannot ensure the privacy of the message
             content. Also, private response directives with field-names are often handled by implementations as if an unqualified private
             directive was received; i.e., the special handling for the qualified form is not widely implemented.
@@ -1345 +1345 @@
             case-insensitive.
          </li>
-         <li> <b>Note:</b> Most HTTP/1.0 caches will not recognize or obey this directive. Also, no-cache response directives with field-names are often
+         <li><b>Note:</b> Most HTTP/1.0 caches will not recognize or obey this directive. Also, no-cache response directives with field-names are often
             handled by implementations as if an unqualified no-cache directive was received; i.e., the special handling for the qualified
             form is not widely implemented.