Changeset 1692 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

Timestamp:

23/06/12 12:01:38 (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

Simplify use of "Note:", make upper/lowercase of sentence start consistent; use "—" where appropriate

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -15 +15 @@
   <!ENTITY ID-MONTH "June">
   <!ENTITY ID-YEAR "2012">
+  <!ENTITY Note "<x:h xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'>Note:</x:h>">
   <!ENTITY architecture               "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#architecture' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY notation                   "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#notation' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
@@ -376 +377 @@
 <x:note>
   <t>
-    <x:h>Note:</x:h> Clients cannot depend on servers to send a 416 (Requested
+    &Note; Clients cannot depend on servers to send a 416 (Requested
     range not satisfiable) response instead of a 200 (OK) response for
     an unsatisfiable Range header field, since not all servers
@@ -1228 +1229 @@
 <x:note>
   <t>
-    <x:h>Note:</x:h> Despite the name "multipart/byteranges" is not limited to the byte ranges only.
+    &Note; Despite the name "multipart/byteranges" is not limited to the byte ranges only.
   </t>
 </x:note>