Changeset 1685 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

Timestamp:

22/06/12 07:32:37 (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

avoid the use of "may"/"should" when it could be confused with MAY/SHOULD

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p5-range.xml

@@ -115 +115 @@
 <note title="Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)">
   <t>
-    Discussion of this draft should take place on the HTTPBIS working group
+    Discussion of this draft ought to take place on the HTTPBIS working group
     mailing list (ietf-http-wg@w3.org), which is archived at
     <eref target="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/"/>.
@@ -623 +623 @@
 <t>
    If the server ignores a byte-range-spec (for example if it is
-   syntactically invalid, or if it may be seen as a denial-of-service
+   syntactically invalid, or if it might be seen as a denial-of-service
    attack), the server &SHOULD; treat the request as if the invalid Range
    header field did not exist. (Normally, this means return a 200
@@ -963 +963 @@
 <section title="Overlapping Ranges" anchor="overlapping.ranges">
 <t>
-   Range requests containing overlapping ranges may lead to the situation
+   Range requests containing overlapping ranges can lead to the situation
    where a server is sending far more data than the size of the complete
    resource representation.