Changeset 163 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

12/01/08 05:09:10 (15 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: make introductions more active and consistent

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -218 +218 @@
 <t>
    HTTP is typically used for distributed information systems, where
-   performance can be improved by the use of response caches. The
-   HTTP/1.1 protocol includes a number of elements intended to make
-   caching work as well as possible. Because these elements are
-   inextricable from other aspects of the protocol, and because they
-   interact with each other, it is useful to describe the basic caching
-   design of HTTP separately from the detailed descriptions of methods,
-   headers, response codes, etc.  This document defines aspects of HTTP
-   related to caching response messages.
+   performance can be improved by the use of response caches, and includes
+   a number of elements intended to make caching work as well as possible.
+   Because these elements interact with each other, it is useful to describe
+   the caching design of HTTP separately.  This document defines aspects of
+   HTTP/1.1 related to caching and reusing response messages.
 </t>