Changeset 163 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

Timestamp:

12/01/08 05:09:10 (14 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: make introductions more active and consistent

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -573 +573 @@
       </ul>
       <h1 id="rfc.section.1" class="np"><a href="#rfc.section.1">1.</a>&nbsp;<a id="caching" href="#caching">Introduction</a></h1>
-      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">HTTP is typically used for distributed information systems, where performance can be improved by the use of response caches.
-         The HTTP/1.1 protocol includes a number of elements intended to make caching work as well as possible. Because these elements
-         are inextricable from other aspects of the protocol, and because they interact with each other, it is useful to describe the
-         basic caching design of HTTP separately from the detailed descriptions of methods, headers, response codes, etc. This document
-         defines aspects of HTTP related to caching response messages.
+      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">HTTP is typically used for distributed information systems, where performance can be improved by the use of response caches,
+         and includes a number of elements intended to make caching work as well as possible. Because these elements interact with
+         each other, it is useful to describe the caching design of HTTP separately. This document defines aspects of HTTP/1.1 related
+         to caching and reusing response messages.
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.iref.c.1"></div>