Changeset 160 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

Timestamp:

12/01/08 01:33:23 (12 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: mark introduction to p4 as unfinished

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

@@ -521 +521 @@
       </ul>
       <h1 id="rfc.section.1" class="np"><a href="#rfc.section.1">1.</a>&nbsp;<a id="introduction" href="#introduction">Introduction</a></h1>
-      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">This document will define aspects of HTTP related to conditional request messages based on time stamps and entity-tags. Right
-         now it only includes the extracted relevant sections of <a href="#RFC2616">RFC 2616</a> <cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1">[RFC2616]</cite> without edit.
+      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">This document defines aspects of HTTP related to conditional request messages based on time stamps and entity-tags. Right
+         now it only includes the extracted relevant sections of <a href="#RFC2616">RFC 2616</a> <cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1">[RFC2616]</cite> with only minor changes. This introduction will be revised in the next draft.
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.1.1"><a href="#rfc.section.1.1">1.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="intro.requirements" href="#intro.requirements">Requirements</a></h2>