Changeset 160


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Timestamp:
Jan 11, 2008, 5:33:23 PM (12 years ago)
Author:
fielding@…
Message:

editorial: mark introduction to p4 as unfinished

Location:
draft-ietf-httpbis/latest
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  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.html

    r157 r160  
    521521      </ul>
    522522      <h1 id="rfc.section.1" class="np"><a href="#rfc.section.1">1.</a>&nbsp;<a id="introduction" href="#introduction">Introduction</a></h1>
    523       <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">This document will define aspects of HTTP related to conditional request messages based on time stamps and entity-tags. Right
    524          now it only includes the extracted relevant sections of <a href="#RFC2616">RFC 2616</a> <cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1">[RFC2616]</cite> without edit.
     523      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">This document defines aspects of HTTP related to conditional request messages based on time stamps and entity-tags. Right
     524         now it only includes the extracted relevant sections of <a href="#RFC2616">RFC 2616</a> <cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1">[RFC2616]</cite> with only minor changes. This introduction will be revised in the next draft.
    525525      </p>
    526526      <h2 id="rfc.section.1.1"><a href="#rfc.section.1.1">1.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="intro.requirements" href="#intro.requirements">Requirements</a></h2>
  • draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

    r153 r160  
    208208<section title="Introduction" anchor="introduction">
    209209<t>
    210    This document will define aspects of HTTP related to conditional
     210   This document defines aspects of HTTP related to conditional
    211211   request messages based on time stamps and entity-tags.  Right now it
    212212   only includes the extracted relevant sections of <xref target="RFC2616">RFC 2616</xref>
    213    without edit.
     213   with only minor changes.  This introduction will be revised in the next draft.
    214214</t>
    215215
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