Changeset 157 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p3-payload.html

Timestamp:

08/01/08 03:19:58 (13 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: Move caching intro in overview to introduction along
with the prerequisite definitions. Move definition of delta-seconds
to where it is first used (Age). Add a couple glue sentences.
Replace redundant "the HTTP/1.1 protocol" with "HTTP/1.1".

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p3-payload.html (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p3-payload.html

@@ -759 +759 @@
                  | Content-Range            ; <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>, <a href="p5-range.html#header.content-range" title="Content-Range">Section 5.2</a>
                  | Content-Type             ; <a href="#header.content-type" id="rfc.xref.header.content-type.2" title="Content-Type">Section&nbsp;5.9</a>
-                 | Expires                  ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.expires" title="Expires">Section 3.3</a>
+                 | Expires                  ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.expires" title="Expires">Section 15.3</a>
                  | Last-Modified            ; <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, <a href="p4-conditional.html#header.last-modified" title="Last-Modified">Section 6.6</a>
                  | extension-header
@@ -835 +835 @@
          header fields not defined by this specification.
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.5">The Vary header field (<a href="p6-cache.html#header.vary" title="Vary">Section 3.5</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>) can be used to express the parameters the server uses to select a representation that is subject to server-driven negotiation.
+      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.5">The Vary header field (<a href="p6-cache.html#header.vary" title="Vary">Section 15.5</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>) can be used to express the parameters the server uses to select a representation that is subject to server-driven negotiation.
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.4.2"><a href="#rfc.section.4.2">4.2</a>&nbsp;<a id="agent-driven.negotiation" href="#agent-driven.negotiation">Agent-driven Negotiation</a></h2>
@@ -1114 +1114 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.5.7.p.5">A cache cannot assume that an entity with a Content-Location different from the URI used to retrieve it can be used to respond
          to later requests on that Content-Location URI. However, the Content-Location can be used to differentiate between multiple
-         entities retrieved from a single requested resource, as described in <a href="p6-cache.html#caching.negotiated.responses" title="Caching Negotiated Responses">Section 2.6</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>.
+         entities retrieved from a single requested resource, as described in <a href="p6-cache.html#caching.negotiated.responses" title="Caching Negotiated Responses">Section 7</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.5.7.p.6">If the Content-Location is a relative URI, the relative URI is interpreted relative to the Request-URI.</p>
@@ -1662 +1662 @@
                   </li>
                   <li class="indline1"><em>Part6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">3.1</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">4.1</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">5.7</a>, <a class="iref" href="#Part6"><b>9.1</b></a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.4">C.1</a><ul class="ind">
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 2.6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">5.7</a></li>
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.3</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">3.1</a></li>
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.5</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">4.1</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 7</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">5.7</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.3</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">3.1</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.5</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">4.1</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>