Changeset 157 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

Timestamp:

Jan 7, 2008, 7:19:58 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: Move caching intro in overview to introduction along
with the prerequisite definitions. Move definition of delta-seconds
to where it is first used (Age). Add a couple glue sentences.
Replace redundant "the HTTP/1.1 protocol" with "HTTP/1.1".

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

@@ -745 +745 @@
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.6"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.9"></span>  response-header = Accept-Ranges           ; <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>, <a href="p5-range.html#header.accept-ranges" title="Accept-Ranges">Section 5.1</a>
-                  | Age                     ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.age" title="Age">Section 3.1</a>
+                  | Age                     ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.age" title="Age">Section 15.1</a>
                   | ETag                    ; <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.5"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, <a href="p4-conditional.html#header.etag" title="ETag">Section 6.1</a>
                   | Location                ; <a href="#header.location" id="rfc.xref.header.location.1" title="Location">Section&nbsp;10.4</a>
@@ -751 +751 @@
                   | Retry-After             ; <a href="#header.retry-after" id="rfc.xref.header.retry-after.1" title="Retry-After">Section&nbsp;10.7</a>
                   | Server                  ; <a href="#header.server" id="rfc.xref.header.server.1" title="Server">Section&nbsp;10.8</a>
-                  | Vary                    ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.vary" title="Vary">Section 3.5</a>
+                  | Vary                    ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.vary" title="Vary">Section 15.5</a>
                   | WWW-Authenticate        ; <a href="#Part7" id="rfc.xref.Part7.4"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 7: Authentication">[Part7]</cite></a>, <a href="p7-auth.html#header.www-authenticate" title="WWW-Authenticate">Section 3.4</a>
 </pre><p id="rfc.section.6.p.3">Response-header field names can be extended reliably only in combination with a change in the protocol version. However, new
@@ -1928 +1928 @@
                   </li>
                   <li class="indline1"><em>Part6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">6</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">6</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">8.3</a>, <a class="iref" href="#Part6"><b>14.1</b></a><ul class="ind">
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">6</a></li>
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.5</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">6</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">6</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.5</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">6</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>