Changeset 157 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

Timestamp:

08/01/08 03:19:58 (13 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

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editorial: Move caching intro in overview to introduction along
with the prerequisite definitions. Move definition of delta-seconds
to where it is first used (Age). Add a couple glue sentences.
Replace redundant "the HTTP/1.1 protocol" with "HTTP/1.1".

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.html

@@ -768 +768 @@
       <dl class="empty">
          <dd>A response is cacheable if a cache is allowed to store a copy of the response message for use in answering subsequent requests.
-            The rules for determining the cacheability of HTTP responses are defined in <a href="p6-cache.html#caching" title="Caching in HTTP">Section 2</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>. Even if a resource is cacheable, there may be additional constraints on whether a cache can use the cached copy for a particular
+            The rules for determining the cacheability of HTTP responses are defined in <a href="p6-cache.html#caching" title="Introduction">Section 1</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>. Even if a resource is cacheable, there may be additional constraints on whether a cache can use the cached copy for a particular
             request.
          </dd>
@@ -825 +825 @@
           &lt;--------- response chain
 </pre><p id="rfc.section.1.4.p.9">Not all responses are usefully cacheable, and some requests may contain modifiers which place special requirements on cache
-         behavior. HTTP requirements for cache behavior and cacheable responses are defined in <a href="p6-cache.html#caching" title="Caching in HTTP">Section 2</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>.
+         behavior. HTTP requirements for cache behavior and cacheable responses are defined in <a href="p6-cache.html#caching" title="Introduction">Section 1</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.2"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.1.4.p.10">In fact, there are a wide variety of architectures and configurations of caches and proxies currently being experimented with
@@ -1288 +1288 @@
          to the entity being transferred. These header fields apply only to the message being transmitted.
       </p>
-      <div id="rfc.figure.u.26"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.60"></span>  general-header = Cache-Control            ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.cache-control" title="Cache-Control">Section 3.2</a>
+      <div id="rfc.figure.u.26"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.60"></span>  general-header = Cache-Control            ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.cache-control" title="Cache-Control">Section 15.2</a>
                  | Connection               ; <a href="#header.connection" id="rfc.xref.header.connection.1" title="Connection">Section&nbsp;8.1</a>
                  | Date                     ; <a href="#header.date" id="rfc.xref.header.date.1" title="Date">Section&nbsp;8.3</a>
-                 | Pragma                   ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.4"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.pragma" title="Pragma">Section 3.4</a>
+                 | Pragma                   ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.4"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.pragma" title="Pragma">Section 15.4</a>
                  | Trailer                  ; <a href="#header.trailer" id="rfc.xref.header.trailer.2" title="Trailer">Section&nbsp;8.6</a>
                  | Transfer-Encoding        ; <a href="#header.transfer-encoding" id="rfc.xref.header.transfer-encoding.4" title="Transfer-Encoding">Section&nbsp;8.7</a>
                  | Upgrade                  ; <a href="#header.upgrade" id="rfc.xref.header.upgrade.1" title="Upgrade">Section&nbsp;8.8</a>
                  | Via                      ; <a href="#header.via" id="rfc.xref.header.via.1" title="Via">Section&nbsp;8.9</a>
-                 | Warning                  ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.5"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.warning" title="Warning">Section 3.6</a>
+                 | Warning                  ; <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.5"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>, <a href="p6-cache.html#header.warning" title="Warning">Section 15.6</a>
 </pre><p id="rfc.section.4.5.p.3">General-header field names can be extended reliably only in combination with a change in the protocol version. However, new
          or experimental header fields may be given the semantics of general header fields if all parties in the communication recognize
@@ -2649 +2649 @@
                   <li class="indline1"><em>Part5</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#Part5"><b>12.1</b></a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part5.1">D.3</a></li>
                   <li class="indline1"><em>Part6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">1.3</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">1.4</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">4.5</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.4">4.5</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.5">4.5</a>, <a class="iref" href="#Part6"><b>12.1</b></a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.6">D.3</a><ul class="ind">
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">1.3</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">1.4</a></li>
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">4.5</a></li>
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.4">4.5</a></li>
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 3.6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.5">4.5</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">1.3</a>, <a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.2">1.4</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.3">4.5</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.4">4.5</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 15.6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.5">4.5</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>