Changeset 156

Timestamp:

08/01/08 03:14:41 (14 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: minor update of p7 introduction to reflect status.

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p7-auth.html (modified) (3 diffs)
• p7-auth.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.html

@@ -517 +517 @@
       </ul>
       <h1 id="rfc.section.1" class="np"><a href="#rfc.section.1">1.</a>&nbsp;<a id="introduction" href="#introduction">Introduction</a></h1>
-      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">This document will define aspects of HTTP related to access control and authentication. Right now it only includes the extracted
-         relevant sections of <cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1">RFC 2616</cite> with only minor edits.
+      <p id="rfc.section.1.p.1">This document defines aspects of HTTP related to access control and authentication. Right now it only includes the extracted
+         relevant sections of <cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.1">RFC 2616</cite> with editorial changes.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.1.p.2">HTTP provides several <em class="bcp14">OPTIONAL</em> challenge-response authentication mechanisms which can be used by a server to challenge a client request and by a client to
@@ -559 +559 @@
          such as credentials that vary according to a challenge value or using synchronized clocks).
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.4">When a shared cache (see <a href="p6-cache.html#shared.and.non-shared.caches" title="Shared and Non-Shared Caches">Section 2.7</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>) receives a request containing an Authorization field, it <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> return the corresponding response as a reply to any other request, unless one of the following specific exceptions holds:
+      <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.4">When a shared cache (see <a href="p6-cache.html#shared.and.non-shared.caches" title="Shared and Non-Shared Caches">Section 8</a> of <a href="#Part6" id="rfc.xref.Part6.1"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 6: Caching">[Part6]</cite></a>) receives a request containing an Authorization field, it <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> return the corresponding response as a reply to any other request, unless one of the following specific exceptions holds:
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.5"> </p>
@@ -761 +761 @@
             <li class="indline0"><a id="rfc.index.P" href="#rfc.index.P"><b>P</b></a><ul class="ind">
                   <li class="indline1"><em>Part6</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">3.1</a>, <a class="iref" href="#Part6"><b>7.1</b></a><ul class="ind">
-                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 2.7</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">3.1</a></li>
+                        <li class="indline1"><em>Section 8</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a class="iref" href="#rfc.xref.Part6.1">3.1</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p7-auth.xml

@@ -202 +202 @@
 <section title="Introduction" anchor="introduction">
 <t>
-   This document will define aspects of HTTP related to access control and
+   This document defines aspects of HTTP related to access control and
    authentication. Right now it only includes the extracted relevant sections
-   of <xref target="RFC2616" x:fmt="none">RFC 2616</xref> with only minor edits.
+   of <xref target="RFC2616" x:fmt="none">RFC 2616</xref> with editorial changes.
 </t>
 <t>