Changeset 1260 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

Timestamp:

Apr 5, 2011, 3:49:27 PM (9 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

editorial: rearrange p4 a bit more to split discussion of last-modified
from that of entity-tags, move entity-tags definition within the ETag
header field, and introduce sections for requirements on generation
and comparison of each (separately). This roughly halves the
cognitive complexity of the existing descriptions and allows us
to get rid of a lot of duplication (with more to come).

Moved some stray requirements on range requests to p5.

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html (modified) (7 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -362 +362 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires October 6, 2011"; 
+       content: "Expires October 7, 2011"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -408 +408 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2011-04-04">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2011-04-05">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. This document is Part 6 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 6 defines requirements on HTTP caches and the associated header fields that control cache behavior or indicate cacheable response messages.">
@@ -434 +434 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: October 6, 2011</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: October 7, 2011</td>
                <td class="right">J. Mogul</td>
             </tr>
@@ -495 +495 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">April 4, 2011</td>
+               <td class="right">April 5, 2011</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -521 +521 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on October 6, 2011.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on October 7, 2011.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2011 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -1021 +1021 @@
       <p id="rfc.section.2.8.p.2">If the new response contains an ETag, it identifies the stored response to use. <span class="comment" id="TODO-mention-CL">[<a href="#TODO-mention-CL" class="smpl">TODO-mention-CL</a>: might need language about Content-Location here]</span><span class="comment" id="TODO-select-for-combine">[<a href="#TODO-select-for-combine" class="smpl">TODO-select-for-combine</a>: Shouldn't this be the selected response?]</span> 
       </p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.2.8.p.3">When the new response's status code is 206 (partial content), a cache <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> combine it with the old response if either response does not have a validator, and <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> combine it with the old response when those validators do not match with the strong comparison function (see <a href="p4-conditional.html#weak.and.strong.validators" title="Weak and Strong Validators">Section 2.3</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>).
+      <p id="rfc.section.2.8.p.3">When the new response's status code is 206 (partial content), a cache <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> combine it with the old response if either response does not have a validator, and <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> combine it with the old response when those validators do not match with the strong comparison function (see <a href="p4-conditional.html#weak.and.strong.validators" title="Weak versus Strong">Section 2.2.2</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>).
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.2.8.p.4">The stored response header fields are used as those of the updated response, except that </p>
@@ -2094 +2094 @@
                   <li><em>Part4</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part4.1">2.3.1.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part4.2">2.4</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part4.3">2.8</a>, <a href="#Part4"><b>8.1</b></a><ul>
                         <li><em>Section 2.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part4.1">2.3.1.1</a></li>
-                        <li><em>Section 2.3</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part4.3">2.8</a></li>
+                        <li><em>Section 2.2.2</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part4.3">2.8</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>