Changeset 115 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

Timestamp:

Dec 30, 2007, 6:56:05 AM (12 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

Add templates for Changes sections throughout, remove intro specific to draft -00, enhance a few more inter-document references, cleanup some leftovers of the symref switchover.

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -18 +18 @@
   <!ENTITY combining-byte-ranges       "<xref target='Part5' x:rel='#combining.byte.ranges' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY entity-length               "<xref target='Part3' x:rel='#entity.length' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
+  <!ENTITY entity-header-fields        "<xref target='Part4' x:rel='#header.fields' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY entity-tags                 "<xref target='Part4' x:rel='#entity.tags' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY full-date                   "<xref target='Part1' x:rel='#full.date' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
@@ -199 +200 @@
 <note title="Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)">
   <t>
-    This version of the HTTP specification contains only minimal editorial
-    changes from <xref target="RFC2616"/> (abstract, introductory paragraph,
-    and authors' addresses).  All other changes are due to partitioning the
-    original into seven mostly independent parts.  The intent is for readers
-    of future drafts to able to use draft 00 as the basis for comparison
-    when the WG makes later changes to the specification text.  This draft
-    will shortly be followed by draft 01 (containing the first round of changes
-    that have already been agreed to on the mailing list). There is no point in
-    reviewing this draft other than to verify that the partitioning has been
-    done correctly.  Roy T. Fielding, Yves Lafon, and Julian Reschke
-    will be the editors after draft 00 is submitted.
-  </t>
-  <t>
     Discussion of this draft should take place on the HTTPBIS working group
     mailing list (ietf-http-wg@w3.org). The current issues list is
@@ -1055 +1043 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   Entity Tags are described in &entity-tags;.
+   Entity Tags are described in &entity-tags;. The headers used with entity
+   tags are described in &entity-header-fields;.
 </t>
 </section>
@@ -2844 +2833 @@
 </section>
 
+<section title="Change Log (to be removed by RFC Editor before publication)">
+
+<section title="Since RFC2616">
+<t>
+  Extracted relevant partitions from <xref target="RFC2616"/>.
+</t>
+</section>
+
+<section title="Since draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-00">
+<t>
+  TBD.
+</t>
+</section>
+
+</section>
+
 </back>
 </rfc>