Changeset 115 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

Timestamp:

Dec 30, 2007, 6:56:05 AM (12 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

Add templates for Changes sections throughout, remove intro specific to draft -00, enhance a few more inter-document references, cleanup some leftovers of the symref switchover.

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml (modified) (6 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p1-messaging.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
   <!ENTITY caching                "<xref target='Part6' x:rel='#caching' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY payload                "<xref target='Part3' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
+  <!ENTITY media-types            "<xref target='Part3' x:rel='#media.types' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
+  <!ENTITY content-codings        "<xref target='Part3' x:rel='#content.codings' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY CONNECT                "<xref target='Part2' x:rel='#CONNECT' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
   <!ENTITY content.negotiation    "<xref target='Part3' x:rel='#content.negotiation' xmlns:x='http://purl.org/net/xml2rfc/ext'/>">
@@ -208 +210 @@
 <note title="Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)">
   <t>
-    This version of the HTTP specification contains only minimal editorial
-    changes from <xref target="RFC2616"/> (abstract, introductory paragraph,
-    and authors' addresses).  All other changes are due to partitioning the
-    original into seven mostly independent parts.  The intent is for readers
-    of future drafts to able to use draft 00 as the basis for comparison
-    when the WG makes later changes to the specification text.  This draft
-    will shortly be followed by draft 01 (containing the first round of changes
-    that have already been agreed to on the mailing list). There is no point in
-    reviewing this draft other than to verify that the partitioning has been
-    done correctly.  Roy T. Fielding, Yves Lafon, and Julian Reschke
-    will be the editors after draft 00 is submitted.
-  </t>
-  <t>
     Discussion of this draft should take place on the HTTPBIS working group
     mailing list (ietf-http-wg@w3.org). The current issues list is
@@ -847 +836 @@
    protocol elements except the entity-body (see <xref target="tolerant.applications"/> for
    tolerant applications). The end-of-line marker within an entity-body
-   is defined by its associated media type, as described in &payload;.
+   is defined by its associated media type, as described in &media-types;.
 </t>
 <figure><artwork type="abnf2616"><iref primary="true" item="Grammar" subitem="CRLF"/>
@@ -1208 +1197 @@
    transfer-coding value tokens. Initially, the registry contains the
    following tokens: "chunked" (<xref target="chunked.transfer.encoding"/>),
-   "gzip" (&payload;), "compress" (&payload;), and "deflate" (&payload;).
+   "gzip", "compress", and "deflate" (&content-codings;).
 </t>
 <t>
    New transfer-coding value tokens &SHOULD; be registered in the same way
-   as new content-coding value tokens (&payload;).
+   as new content-coding value tokens (&content-codings;).
 </t>
 <t>
@@ -2902 +2891 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   Jim Gettys (the current editor of this document) wishes particularly
-   to thank Roy Fielding, the previous editor of this document, along
+   Jim Gettys (the editor of <xref target="RFC2616"/>) wishes particularly
+   to thank Roy Fielding, the editor of <xref target="RFC2068"/>, along
    with John Klensin, Jeff Mogul, Paul Leach, Dave Kristol, Koen
    Holtman, John Franks, Josh Cohen, Alex Hopmann, Scott Lawrence, and
@@ -3984 +3973 @@
 </t>
 </section>
-
-</section>
+</section>
+
+<section title="Change Log (to be removed by RFC Editor before publication)">
+
+<section title="Since RFC2616">
+<t>
+  Extracted relevant partitions from <xref target="RFC2616"/>.
+</t>
+</section>
+
+<section title="Since draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-00">
+<t>
+  TBD.
+</t>
+</section>
+
+</section>
+
 </back>
 </rfc>