Changeset 1137 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

Timestamp:

Feb 22, 2011, 5:39:55 AM (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

apply editorial improvements suggested by Ben Niven-Jenkins in <​http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/2011JanMar/0164.html>, also avoid the word "required" when it's not a keyword (see #137)

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• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

@@ -576 +576 @@
 <t>
    The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the
-   Status-Code and is intended for the human user. The client is not required
+   Status-Code and is intended for a human user. The client does not need
    to examine or display the Reason-Phrase.
 </t>
@@ -601 +601 @@
 <section title="Overview of Status Codes" anchor="overview.of.status.codes">
 <t>  
-   The status codes listed below are defined in <xref target="status.codes"/>,
-   &p4-status-codes;, &p5-status-codes;, and &p7-status-codes;. The reason
-   phrases listed here are only recommendations &mdash; they can be replaced
-   by local equivalents without affecting the protocol.
+   The status codes listed below are defined in <xref target="status.codes"/>
+   of this specification, &p4-status-codes;, &p5-status-codes;, and &p7-status-codes;.
+   The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations &mdash; they can be
+   replaced by local equivalents without affecting the protocol.
 </t>
 <texttable align="left">