Changeset 1137 for draft-ietf-httpbis

Timestamp:

22/02/11 13:39:55 (10 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

apply editorial improvements suggested by Ben Niven-Jenkins in <​http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/ietf-http-wg/2011JanMar/0164.html>, also avoid the word "required" when it's not a keyword (see #137)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p2-semantics.html (modified) (2 diffs)
• p2-semantics.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.html

@@ -883 +883 @@
       <h1 id="rfc.section.4"><a href="#rfc.section.4">4.</a>&nbsp;<a id="status.code.and.reason.phrase" href="#status.code.and.reason.phrase">Status Code and Reason Phrase</a></h1>
       <p id="rfc.section.4.p.1">The Status-Code element is a 3-digit integer result code of the attempt to understand and satisfy the request.</p>
-      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.2">The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the Status-Code and is intended for the human user. The
-         client is not required to examine or display the Reason-Phrase.
+      <p id="rfc.section.4.p.2">The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the Status-Code and is intended for a human user. The
+         client does not need to examine or display the Reason-Phrase.
       </p>
       <div id="rfc.figure.u.10"></div><pre class="inline"><span id="rfc.iref.g.3"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.4"></span><span id="rfc.iref.g.5"></span>  <a href="#status.code.and.reason.phrase" class="smpl">Status-Code</a>    = 3<a href="#notation" class="smpl">DIGIT</a>
@@ -895 +895 @@
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.4.1"><a href="#rfc.section.4.1">4.1</a>&nbsp;<a id="overview.of.status.codes" href="#overview.of.status.codes">Overview of Status Codes</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.1">The status codes listed below are defined in <a href="#status.codes" title="Status Code Definitions">Section&nbsp;8</a>, <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.10"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, <a href="p5-range.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.6"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>, and <a href="p7-auth.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part7" id="rfc.xref.Part7.7"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 7: Authentication">[Part7]</cite></a>. The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations — they can be replaced by local equivalents without affecting the
+      <p id="rfc.section.4.1.p.1">The status codes listed below are defined in <a href="#status.codes" title="Status Code Definitions">Section&nbsp;8</a> of this specification, <a href="p4-conditional.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part4" id="rfc.xref.Part4.10"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 4: Conditional Requests">[Part4]</cite></a>, <a href="p5-range.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part5" id="rfc.xref.Part5.6"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 5: Range Requests and Partial Responses">[Part5]</cite></a>, and <a href="p7-auth.html#status.code.definitions" title="Status Code Definitions">Section 3</a> of <a href="#Part7" id="rfc.xref.Part7.7"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 7: Authentication">[Part7]</cite></a>. The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations — they can be replaced by local equivalents without affecting the
          protocol.
       </p>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p2-semantics.xml

@@ -576 +576 @@
 <t>
    The Reason-Phrase is intended to give a short textual description of the
-   Status-Code and is intended for the human user. The client is not required
+   Status-Code and is intended for a human user. The client does not need
    to examine or display the Reason-Phrase.
 </t>
@@ -601 +601 @@
 <section title="Overview of Status Codes" anchor="overview.of.status.codes">
 <t>  
-   The status codes listed below are defined in <xref target="status.codes"/>,
-   &p4-status-codes;, &p5-status-codes;, and &p7-status-codes;. The reason
-   phrases listed here are only recommendations &mdash; they can be replaced
-   by local equivalents without affecting the protocol.
+   The status codes listed below are defined in <xref target="status.codes"/>
+   of this specification, &p4-status-codes;, &p5-status-codes;, and &p7-status-codes;.
+   The reason phrases listed here are only recommendations &mdash; they can be
+   replaced by local equivalents without affecting the protocol.
 </t>
 <texttable align="left">