Changeset 1129 for draft-ietf-httpbis

Timestamp:

21/02/11 06:41:13 (11 years ago)

Author:

mnot@…

Message:

Tighten up definition of 'public'; see #268.

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest

Files:

• p6-cache.html (modified) (7 diffs)
• p6-cache.xml (modified) (1 diff)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.html

@@ -356 +356 @@
   } 
   @bottom-center {
-       content: "Expires August 21, 2011"; 
+       content: "Expires August 25, 2011"; 
   } 
   @bottom-right {
@@ -402 +402 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-p6-cache-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2011-02-17">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2011-02-21">
       <meta name="dct.replaces" content="urn:ietf:rfc:2616">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) is an application-level protocol for distributed, collaborative, hypermedia information systems. This document is Part 6 of the seven-part specification that defines the protocol referred to as &#34;HTTP/1.1&#34; and, taken together, obsoletes RFC 2616. Part 6 defines requirements on HTTP caches and the associated header fields that control cache behavior or indicate cacheable response messages.">
@@ -428 +428 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: August 21, 2011</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: August 25, 2011</td>
                <td class="right">J. Mogul</td>
             </tr>
@@ -489 +489 @@
             <tr>
                <td class="left"></td>
-               <td class="right">February 17, 2011</td>
+               <td class="right">February 21, 2011</td>
             </tr>
          </tbody>
@@ -515 +515 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on August 21, 2011.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on August 25, 2011.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2011 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -1154 +1154 @@
       </p>
       <ul class="empty">
-         <li>The public response directive indicates that a cache <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> store the response, even if it would normally be non-cacheable or cacheable only within a private cache. (See also Authorization, <a href="p7-auth.html#header.authorization" title="Authorization">Section 4.1</a> of <a href="#Part7" id="rfc.xref.Part7.3"><cite title="HTTP/1.1, part 7: Authentication">[Part7]</cite></a>, for additional details.)
+         <li>The public response directive indicates that a response whose associated request contains an 'Authentication' header <em class="bcp14">MAY</em> be stored (see <a href="#caching.authenticated.responses" title="Shared Caching of Authenticated Responses">Section&nbsp;2.6</a>).
          </li>
       </ul>
@@ -2097 +2097 @@
                      </ul>
                   </li>
-                  <li><em>Part7</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.1">2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.2">2.6</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.3">3.2.2</a>, <a href="#Part7"><b>8.1</b></a><ul>
-                        <li><em>Section 4.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.1">2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.2">2.6</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.3">3.2.2</a></li>
+                  <li><em>Part7</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.1">2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.2">2.6</a>, <a href="#Part7"><b>8.1</b></a><ul>
+                        <li><em>Section 4.1</em>&nbsp;&nbsp;<a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.1">2.1</a>, <a href="#rfc.xref.Part7.2">2.6</a></li>
                      </ul>
                   </li>

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p6-cache.xml

@@ -1251 +1251 @@
    <iref item="public" primary="true" subitem="Cache Directive" />
    <list>
-      <t>The public response directive indicates that a cache &MAY; store
-      the response, even if it would normally be non-cacheable or cacheable only
-      within a private cache. (See also Authorization,
-      &header-authorization;, for additional details.) </t>
+      <t>The public response directive indicates that a response whose 
+        associated request contains an 'Authentication' header &MAY; be 
+        stored (see <xref target="caching.authenticated.responses" />).</t>
   </list>
 </t>