Changeset 1107 for draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

Timestamp:

09/02/11 00:23:14 (10 years ago)

Author:

fielding@…

Message:

Change the undefined use of "transparent proxy" to a definition
of transforming and non-transforming proxies. Add new definitions
for "intercepts" and the other kind of "transparent proxy".
Should we add informational references to RFC1919 and RFC3040 ?

Addresses #210

File:

• draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis/latest/p4-conditional.xml

@@ -646 +646 @@
 </t>
 <t>
-   In order to be legal, a strong entity-tag &MUST; change whenever the
+   In order to be legitimate, a strong entity-tag &MUST; change whenever the
    associated representation changes in any way. A weak entity-tag &SHOULD;
    change whenever the associated representation changes in a semantically
@@ -707 +707 @@
       conservative assumptions about the validators they receive.
   </t><t>
-      HTTP/1.0 clients and caches will ignore entity-tags. Generally,
+      HTTP/1.0 clients and caches might ignore entity-tags. Generally,
       last-modified values received or used by these systems will
       support transparent and efficient caching, and so HTTP/1.1 origin