Changeset 1096

Timestamp:

Dec 4, 2010, 1:25:06 AM (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

avoid passive voice in SHOULDs

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest

Files:

• draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.html (modified) (7 diffs)
• draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest/draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.html

@@ -404 +404 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-12-01">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-12-04">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="HTTP/1.1 defines the Content-Disposition response header field, but points out that it is not part of the HTTP/1.1 Standard. This specification takes over the definition and registration of Content-Disposition, as used in HTTP, and clarifies internationalization aspects.">
       <meta name="description" content="HTTP/1.1 defines the Content-Disposition response header field, but points out that it is not part of the HTTP/1.1 Standard. This specification takes over the definition and registration of Content-Disposition, as used in HTTP, and clarifies internationalization aspects.">
@@ -422 +422 @@
                <td class="left">Updates: <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616">2616</a> (if approved)
                </td>
-               <td class="right">December 1, 2010</td>
+               <td class="right">December 4, 2010</td>
             </tr>
             <tr>
@@ -429 +429 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: June 4, 2011</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: June 7, 2011</td>
                <td class="right"></td>
             </tr>
@@ -458 +458 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 4, 2011.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on June 7, 2011.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2010 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -607 +607 @@
       <ul>
          <li>
-            <p>When the value contains path separator characters, all but the last segment <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> be ignored. This prevents unintentional overwriting of well-known file system location (such as "/etc/passwd").
+            <p>When the value contains path separator characters, recipients <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> ignore all but the last path segment. This prevents unintentional overwriting of well-known file system location (such as
+               "/etc/passwd").
             </p>
          </li>
@@ -633 +634 @@
       </div>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.3.4"><a href="#rfc.section.3.4">3.4</a>&nbsp;<a id="disposition.parameter.extensions" href="#disposition.parameter.extensions">Disposition Parameter: Extensions</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.3.4.p.1">To enable future extensions, unknown parameters <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> be ignored (see also <a href="#RFC2183" id="rfc.xref.RFC2183.3"><cite title="Communicating Presentation Information in Internet Messages: The Content-Disposition Header Field">[RFC2183]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2183#section-2.8">Section 2.8</a>).
+      <p id="rfc.section.3.4.p.1">To enable future extensions, recipients <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> ignore unrecognized parameters (see also <a href="#RFC2183" id="rfc.xref.RFC2183.3"><cite title="Communicating Presentation Information in Internet Messages: The Content-Disposition Header Field">[RFC2183]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2183#section-2.8">Section 2.8</a>).
       </p>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.3.5"><a href="#rfc.section.3.5">3.5</a>&nbsp;<a id="extensibility" href="#extensibility">Extensibility</a></h2>
@@ -944 +945 @@
       </ul>
       <h2 id="rfc.section.D.9"><a href="#rfc.section.D.9">D.9</a>&nbsp;<a id="changes.since.04" href="#changes.since.04">Since draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp-04</a></h2>
-      <p id="rfc.section.D.9.p.1">None yet.</p>
+      <p id="rfc.section.D.9.p.1">No non-editorial changes yet.</p>
       <h1 id="rfc.index"><a href="#rfc.index">Index</a></h1>
       <p class="noprint"><a href="#rfc.index.C">C</a> <a href="#rfc.index.H">H</a> <a href="#rfc.index.I">I</a> <a href="#rfc.index.R">R</a> 

draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest/draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.xml

@@ -228 +228 @@
   <list style="symbols">
     <x:lt><t>
-      When the value contains path separator characters, all but the last
-      segment &SHOULD; be ignored. This prevents unintentional overwriting
-      of well-known file system location (such as "/etc/passwd").
+      When the value contains path separator characters, recipients &SHOULD;
+      ignore all but the last path segment. This prevents unintentional
+      overwriting of well-known file system location (such as "/etc/passwd").
     </t></x:lt>
     <x:lt><t>
@@ -266 +266 @@
 <section title="Disposition Parameter: Extensions" anchor="disposition.parameter.extensions">
 <t>
-  To enable future extensions, unknown parameters &SHOULD; be ignored (see also <xref target="RFC2183" x:fmt="," x:sec="2.8"/>).
+  To enable future extensions, recipients &SHOULD; ignore unrecognized
+  parameters (see also <xref target="RFC2183" x:fmt="," x:sec="2.8"/>).
 </t>
 </section>
@@ -926 +927 @@
 <section title="Since draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp-04" anchor="changes.since.04">
 <t>
-  None yet.
+  No non-editorial changes yet.
 </t>
 </section>