Changeset 1073 for draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp

Timestamp:

Nov 2, 2010, 8:20:18 AM (9 years ago)

Author:

julian.reschke@…

Message:

avoid passive voice in requirement (resolves #258)

Location:

draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest

Files:

• draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.html (modified) (6 diffs)
• draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest/draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.html

@@ -404 +404 @@
       <meta name="dct.creator" content="Reschke, J. F.">
       <meta name="dct.identifier" content="urn:ietf:id:draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp-latest">
-      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-11-01">
+      <meta name="dct.issued" scheme="ISO8601" content="2010-11-02">
       <meta name="dct.abstract" content="HTTP/1.1 defines the Content-Disposition response header field, but points out that it is not part of the HTTP/1.1 Standard. This specification takes over the definition and registration of Content-Disposition, as used in HTTP, and clarifies internationalization aspects.">
       <meta name="description" content="HTTP/1.1 defines the Content-Disposition response header field, but points out that it is not part of the HTTP/1.1 Standard. This specification takes over the definition and registration of Content-Disposition, as used in HTTP, and clarifies internationalization aspects.">
@@ -422 +422 @@
                <td class="left">Updates: <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616">2616</a> (if approved)
                </td>
-               <td class="right">November 1, 2010</td>
+               <td class="right">November 2, 2010</td>
             </tr>
             <tr>
@@ -429 +429 @@
             </tr>
             <tr>
-               <td class="left">Expires: May 5, 2011</td>
+               <td class="left">Expires: May 6, 2011</td>
                <td class="right"></td>
             </tr>
@@ -458 +458 @@
          in progress”.
       </p>
-      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on May 5, 2011.</p>
+      <p>This Internet-Draft will expire on May 6, 2011.</p>
       <h1><a id="rfc.copyrightnotice" href="#rfc.copyrightnotice">Copyright Notice</a></h1>
       <p>Copyright © 2010 IETF Trust and the persons identified as the document authors. All rights reserved.</p>
@@ -568 +568 @@
       <p>Defined in <a href="#RFC5987" id="rfc.xref.RFC5987.1"><cite title="Character Set and Language Encoding for Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Header Field Parameters">[RFC5987]</cite></a>:
       </p>  <pre class="inline">  ext-value   = &lt;ext-value, defined in <a href="#RFC5987" id="rfc.xref.RFC5987.2"><cite title="Character Set and Language Encoding for Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Header Field Parameters">[RFC5987]</cite></a>, <a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5987#section-3.2">Section 3.2</a>&gt;
-</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.4">Parameter names <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> be repeated; a header field value with multiple instances of the same parameter <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> be treated as invalid.
+</pre><p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.4">Senders <em class="bcp14">MUST NOT</em> generate header field values with multiple instances of the same parameter name. Recipients <em class="bcp14">SHOULD</em> treat these values as invalid.
       </p>
       <p id="rfc.section.3.1.p.5">Note that due to the rules for implied linear whitespace (<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc2616#section-2.1">Section 2.1</a> of <a href="#RFC2616" id="rfc.xref.RFC2616.8"><cite title="Hypertext Transfer Protocol -- HTTP/1.1">[RFC2616]</cite></a>), OPTIONAL whitespace can appear between words (token or quoted-string) and separator characters.
@@ -928 +928 @@
          </li>
          <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/253">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/253</a>&gt;: "clarify what LWS means for the Content-Disp grammar"
+         </li>
+         <li> &lt;<a href="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/258">http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/258</a>&gt;: "Avoid passive voice in message requirements"
          </li>
       </ul>

draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp/latest/draft-ietf-httpbis-content-disp.xml

@@ -156 +156 @@
 
 <t>
-  Parameter names &MUST-NOT; be repeated; a header field value with
-  multiple instances of the same parameter &SHOULD; be treated as invalid.
+  Senders &MUST-NOT; generate header field values with multiple instances of
+  the same parameter name. Recipients &SHOULD; treat these values
+  as invalid.
 </t>
 <t>
@@ -884 +885 @@
       "clarify what LWS means for the Content-Disp grammar"
     </t>
+    <t>
+      <eref target="http://tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/ticket/258"/>:
+      "Avoid passive voice in message requirements"
+    </t>
   </list>
 </t>